Torn Decisions - Part 13
Added 2024-06-07 21:58:25 +0000 UTCThe moment Alex has been waiting for!
Password - abella
Hey Uncreative Readers,
I do not expect too much more of this story as I am almost finished with it completely. I plan to put a poll out on what kind of story you guys would want next as I want you all to enjoy the content I put out just as much as I enjoy making it. I also appreciate all the positive feedback I have been receiving and I wanted to thank you all for supporting me. I hope you all enjoy this part as it was a fun one. Enjoy!
The Uncreative Writerr
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Thank you for the feedback as it is much appreciated. I have grown to like your feedback. I will keep it in mind for the next part. The day I finally get your stamp of approval I will be able to retire from writing but not until then :)
Uncreative Writer
2024-06-07 23:49:54 +0000 UTCOk I'm going to be very honest... Its great you finally decided to let Alex and Katie do it... But you HAVE to understand what "continuity" means. Katie can't be changing her panties 3 times in a matter of minutes.... She's in GREY panties when talking to Alex before they fuck.... In WHITE panties when she's giving him a blowjob and BLUE panties when they are poolside and fucking.... That's just hilariously unrealistic. When you are choosing pictures for a part, please please make sure the dresses, hairstyle etc. is consistent and not from two different videos or photoshoots. Otherwise the whole thing is ruined.... Just a pro tip.
NeoBee99
2024-06-07 23:01:49 +0000 UTC
