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DD 203 Ch 4

My back slid down a limestone pillar as the group took a breather before we went after the second boss. After the first, we'd been clearing trash for about an hour and a half.

 Much of that time, I had spent at accelerated speeds with Liminal Speed. My thighs ached as I massaged them with one hand while fishing through my CID for a sandwich with the other.

Felin plopped into my lap, making me wince from my sore thighs. She wiggled in my lap, a giddy laugh on her lips, and her tail batting at my nose.

"Having fun?" I asked her, grabbing her hips and trying to hold her still to save my sore legs and my growing erection.

"A lot of fun," Felin said, snatching the sandwich out of my hand and taking a nibble from it before handing it back to me. "I'd never been in a raid before." She was excited to explore the raid with the class.

"Well, I'm glad to have you along. Between you and Elysara, you're helping make the 25 party member raid full."

Felin grinned and leaned back at me, thankfully stopping wiggling in my lap. My body couldn't decide between enjoying it and the pain of my sore thighs. I wasn't a masochist, and frankly, my body was confused.

"Lots of fun," Felin repeated. "If only we didn't have so many of these stupid crocodiles." Most of the raid agreed with her assessment.

The further we'd gone from the first boss towards the second, the more the raid shifted. While the first half had all been ruins and sand, the closer we got to the second boss, the more plants had taken root amid the cracks.

Even several streams had cut their way through the limestone. Life had managed to take root, even amongst the hard stone. It had continued to get greener and at this point, the second boss's room was nearly a lush tropical paradise.

Amid the tropical paradise and the rivers that cut through it there were crocodiles. Lots and lots of crocodiles. Bushes that were far too small to hold the scaly bastards were somehow filled with them.

They would spawn out of the smallest bushes. Crocodiles the size of a tiger would rush the party from every shrub. Unlike the giant scarabs that were largely single mob fights, the crocodiles came in large packs, sometimes as large as 20. They were giving our tanks a run for their money, trying to defend from so many beasts at once.

More than once a ranged dps or healer fled from an ambush only to trigger a second.

Felin was rubbing her tail, reminding me of the time earlier where one had managed to chomp down on it. She had yowled and screamed like an upset cat before she utterly obliterated the crocodile with a strike of her spear filled with magic.

I held on to her while I continued to nibble at my sandwich. She pulled some jerky out of her pouch, and let out a sigh of contentment as she relaxed against me.

"Are you at least comfortable raiding with us. Do you miss your people?" I asked, curious how Felin was doing. She had been away from other Nekorians now for long enough that I was worried she would start to grow homesick. But instead she just shrugged.

"It's all the same to me. Adventure with humans, with Nekorians." She dipped her head back and forth, causing the white and blue ears on top of her head to bounce. "It's different, but not bad."

She seemed rather flexible, which was certainly true in more ways than one.

I rubbed a hand along her thigh, covered in thin leather pants.

"Well, let me know if there's anything we can do. Last thing I want to do is inconvenience a Nekorian shaman, given how you are helping us with so much."

She twisted in my lap and planted a kiss on my cheek. "Not a problem," she winked, only for Charlotte to sit down next to me, plopping Bun-Bun in her lap.

"Phew!" The green-haired druid let out an explosive breath. "I don't know how this is so much more exhausting than everything else we've done," Charlotte said.

The answer was on the tip of my tongue, but Des beat me to it as she sat down with the rest of our group. Fayeth and Elysara joined us as well.

"It's the focus," Des said. "Being so intensely focused for so long is draining in its own unique way."

"Yeah, but we've had to focus plenty when we were doing the vampire event or training," Charlotte argued.

I shook my head in agreement with Des. "The raid is different, especially with how many times we've died." That brought a somber expression to many of their faces. We'd only died once to the first boss, but especially with the crocodiles, most people in the raid had died at least once when a swarm spawned unexpectedly. They could quickly chew through the health of one of the raid members if they were the target of the ambush.

I think Felin was the only one that hadn't actually died yet this raid. Then again, the Nekorian was incredibly quick on her feet for a support and tended to stay back and out of range most of the time.

The rabbit in Charlotte's lap huffed and started nudging her hands around, causing the druid to roll her eyes and pull out a large bed of lettuce for him. The rabbit quickly started munching. Everyone took that as a cue and pulled out a light snack and something to drink as we relaxed for a minute before we returned to the raid and its second boss.

"What do we know about this boss?" Elysara asked as we were all eating.

"Well," I said gesturing through the bronze gate ahead of us, "it's a giant fucking crocodile." Everyone looked into the boss room that had a river running down the center and a very obvious giant crocodile swimming in it. "And from what I understand in raids, most of the time the mobs leading up to the boss give you a hint as to some of the boss mechanics. I'm guessing we're going to get swarmed by crocodiles," I said flatly, not enjoying the idea any more than the rest of my group.

"That's gonna suck," Elysara said.

"Yeah, it will," Des agreed. "Which is why we have to figure out how it works. And we're gonna go in the first time, assuming we're going to die horrible, crocodile-horror-fueled deaths." Her words trailed off towards the end.

It was an adjustment, knowing that we were walking to our deaths every time we walked past those bronze doors.

Especially going into the fight with the idea that we were going to learn rather than defeat it on the first try. Dying went against every human instinct we had. But I also knew this was something that adventurers had to get over. That went double those who would eventually be on the forefront of exploring the depths of the dungeon.

Deaths happened. The trick was making sure that you would come back from them each time.

After a moment of quiet amongst the group, I smiled and tried to bring everyone's mood up. "It's a good thing our healers are so cute," I squeezed Charlotte next to me and Felin in my lap, giving them both a peck on the cheek.

Charlotte blushed as red as a rose and Felin turned to get more of a kiss from me. Her greedy lips sucking on mine.

Des chuckled beside me, her eyes shining. "That's what we have to do. We have to remind ourselves that it's all worth it in the end."

"Yeah," I agreed. "This is how we get rich."

"And powerful," Charlotte added on.

"It's how we maintain order," Elysara wasn’t one to be left out.

"Order,” Des echoed with a frown before winking at me. “It's how you get the good ones."

Felin laughed at that and I glanced at the woman in my lap, curiously raising an eyebrow to see why she wanted more. She just shrugged. "Life under the Great One is all I've ever known."

I frowned at that, still not having a clear picture of Felin's upbringing. Obviously, we all knew that Nekorians worshiped the dungeon as a not-so-benevolent god.

However, Felin rarely spoke of her childhood, if she had one. Every time she spoke of her past, she was always in the dungeon.

"And what about you, Fayeth?" I asked the last member of her group, who had remained quiet.

She shrugged with a small smile. "I'm just here to protect all of you. To make sure we can live a happy life."

I pulled Felin off my lap to move Fayeth into it, wanting to snuggle the petite tan elf for her words. There was a collective coo of awe from the rest of my ladies. I cleared my throat to clear the air.

"I hope you all know that I am not walking out of this dungeon without all of you in tow." My heart thumped in my chest with those words.

Charlotte put a hand on my thigh. "I think it goes without saying, but all of us feel the same." They all nodded along.

I held Fayeth tighter in my lap, a feeling of warmth in my heart.

My grandparents had once pushed me to be more open to harems, saying that they were good for adventurers. Only after knowing the affection between me and these five women did I really understand what grandpa meant.

Even then, most of these relationships were still fairly short, considering the lengths of our lives. And so far, our affection and bonds together had only grown stronger.

"Time's up." Candice was standing, tapping at her CID, speaking loud enough to get everyone's attention and people back on their feet.

The class grumbled and groaned as they all pushed off walls and pillars, getting their feet underneath them, and preparing for the boss to come.

I was still on the ground, Fayeth in my lap. "Candice, why don't you run us through what we know."

This blonde tugged her clothes that never needed straightening. "This boss is a giant crocodile," she pointed through the doors. "We have to be very careful. The river runs through the very center of the room and we can’t stay in the water. One entire side of the room is going to be flooded. If you're on the flooded side, crocodiles will spawn rapidly and endlessly until you get to the other."

Taylor raised her hand. "How does that work? Physically? Shouldn’t it just run back into the river?"

Candice shrugged. "We're going to have to find that out. Because from here, everything looks flat to me."

The rest of the raid agreed, and decided we would just have to learn on the fly.

"The other concern," Candice said, "is the boss will occasionally grab one of the tanks and drag them into the water, thrashing and dealing a large amount of damage."

I could feel Fayeth twitch in my lap.

Helen raised her hand. "That means we're rotating tanks." It was more of a statement than a question.

"I think that will be part of the plan," Candice nodded. "That way you guys can use cooldowns, if nothing else, to reduce the pain you feel."

All of the tanks nodded at that.

"Finally," Candice said, "every now and then someone will be marked."

There was an immediate interruption. "What's the mark look like?"

Candice shrugged. "I'm sure it will be fairly obvious. The marked person, after several seconds, will become the focus of every crocodile in the room, including the boss."

"Please tell me that only affects tanks." One of the healers raised their hand.

Candice sighed. "It does not."

The way some of the ranged DPS turned absolutely green told me we were going to have a little bit of a panic problem when this ability first triggered.

I pulled Fayeth off my lap and got to my feet. "Well then, we will just have to go in and see this first hand."

Candice nodded, as did many of the girls. Sometimes the best thing you could do was experience it for yourself. That and continuing to dwell on it wasn’t going to do anyone any good.

"We'll go in, spread out as much as we can in the room, and Myrtle, are you okay taking the first round?" I asked.

The big girl, with a bowl cut, nodded her head, her voice coming out whisper soft. "Sure."

"Alright everyone," I dusted off my pants. "Let's get to it."

We were all spread out in the boss room in short order. When Myrtle charged right up to the water to get the boss's attention, everyone was staring at her.

I paused, waiting for the tank to get aggro before I began. However, the boss fight did not start as we expected.

Myrtle got the boss's attention by getting close enough, and she smacked it once on the snout with her mace. In the blink of an eye, it rushed her, closing its jaws around her waist and slipping back into the water, thrashing and spinning with Myrtle in its jaws. The response from the healers was immediate. They began to throw spell after spell at the tank, trying to keep her alive.

The other tanks rushed up and tried to get aggro on the boss. Every person whose feet touched the water started to spawn alligators that rushed one after the other out of the water to them. Of course, then the healers spamming their spells to keep Myrtle alive attracted the attention of the adds.

"Out of the water, everyone, out of the water!" I shouted over the chaos that quickly ensued. The tanks staggered back, taking measured steps as they tried to get the attention of the adds with wide sweeping attacks. Myrtle, still in the water, continued to spawn adds.

However, unlike the beetles we'd experienced in the last fight, these crocodiles went down quickly with a little help from the ranged DPS.

The crocodile released Myrtle, and I rushed up to grab her hands, pulling her from the water. She looked dizzy and disoriented, her eyes unable to focus on me.

The healers were still slinging spells onto her, making her glow like some sort of valiant angel.

Penny had picked up the boss's aggro and was slowly pulling it out of the water while walking backwards and defending herself. Myrtle got herself under control and pushed me off.

"We should probably start dealing damage," She said.

I gave her a quick nod and jumped back into the fight, my blade scoring along the boss's side, leaving scratches in its thick hide as I worked to deal as much damage as possible.

"Holy fuck, that was rough," Taylor chuckled beside me as she glanced over at Myrtle. "Talk about a heavy start."

I watched as the tank got herself back under control and rejoined the fight. I shook my head at Taylor. "This is why I'm glad I'm not a tank."

"Me too," she replied, looking a little extra relieved that she’d shed her shield for the raid group.

The fight continued for another minute before the boss opened its mouth and began spewing a giant column of water as it swept from side to side.

"Other side of the river," I shouted, guessing this is how one of the sides flooded. The water gushing out of the boss quickly pooled on this side of the river, washing away loose soil. Strangely, it seemed like the other side slightly rose up. The dungeon once again defied physics as one side filled with water and land rose on the other.

As soon as I waded into the water, a crocodile materialized behind me, starting to snap at my hips. I smiled at the easy target to keep up my [Liminal Speed] stacks and slashed at it with my daggers as I moved. Before I finished the first, a second was already on me, both of the crocodile attacks nipping away at my health.

"Gather up on me!" I called.

Harley was one of the first to reach the other side, playing her flute as she waded through the river. Sparkles of magic, most likely her haste ability, danced off her as she played.

No one argued. Everyone quickly gathered around Harley and began unleashing their AOE abilities one after the other.

The crocodiles were quickly dying. As soon as someone brought theirs to the group, it expired in just a few seconds.

However, as this continued, the boss swam through the water much faster than it had moved on land. It emerged to grab Penny when she was only a few feet out of the water. Its jaws snapped around her and pulled her into the river, spiraling in a death roll just as it had done to Myrtle.

The healers, already caught up in trying to heal the group, were now strained trying to heal Penny as well.

Meanwhile, an alligator snout-shaped arrow began to flash over Meredith. "Oh fuck. Oh fuck. Not me. Not me," Meredith began to panic.

Harley turned to her girlfriend and played the flute at her, giving her haste.

"Run," Des said, shoving the healer. I saw Felin whip her spear around, and a gust of wind blew Meredith away from the group just in time. Alligators surged out of the water and the boss with them, abandoning Penny, as all of the monsters in the room rushed after Meredith.

I had never seen a priest run so fast in her life.

She sprinted as if there was an entire pack of crocodiles nipping at her heels, which there was, including one that could swallow her whole.

She ran, unfortunately, to the corner of the room, suddenly backed against it, realizing she had run out of space to maneuver.

The boss reached her as well as all of the little crocodiles.

The healer's layered on spells, Felin cast her bubble of ice that had protected our party on multiple occasions.

Though it all shattered just as quickly as it came, the wounds piling up on Meredith faster than the healers could mend them.

Meredith screamed something unintelligible before she collapsed on the ground and the red arrow above her head faded. We all stood there stupidly for a moment as one of our raid died.

"Shit," Taylor cursed next to me. "How the heck are we supposed to dodge that?"

I glanced at the room and realized that when we crossed the water, it probably would have been best for us to go to one of the sides, giving whoever got marked a longer runway. I stowed that away for the next time, seeing as we were now faced with the boss and several dozen smaller crocodiles.

Helen was the first to get the boss's attention back on her. The paladin, more than happy to take a beating, was hit by the large crocodile before searing light poured off of her shield into the boss and the rest of them.

I was already there, just behind the crocodile's jaw cleaving into its shoulder, trying to deal as much damage as possible.

DPS picked up back on the boss, the small crocodiles quickly dying as soon as they came, until the boss squatted low and water began to pour out of its mouth again.

"Everyone, follow me!" I shouted, using shadow ambush on the person furthest through the water and then activating sprint. I hurried ahead, getting two crocodiles on me as I ran and using them to keep up [Liminal Speed]. Unfortunately for me, I killed both of them too quickly. By the time I got to the other side, the land was rising and I had nothing to attack.

The others were hurrying to gather on me. I had chosen to hug one side of the room. Others had gone towards the center again and were having to correct themselves, rushing down the strip of land towards me while crocodiles nipped away at their health.

Things weren’t going terrible, but it was plain to see that chaos was seeping into every moment of the fight already.

Comments

Thx for the chapter

Kconraw

Possible punctuation error: "Are you at least comfortable raiding with us. Do you miss your people?" That first sentence seems like a question, but has a period instead of a question mark.

Lycaon

All right I decided to dial back the asshole and try to be civil here. Okay you said it doesn't provide anything I disagree. 1. It gives Ken money Crimson made a bet to give Ken an easy way to hussle the prince. 2. Crimson was having fun with Ken I compare this to what Kat does in book 4 of mana where she makes a play in the immortal world without informing Issac to spice up things for them later it is clearly in her nature to be mischievous. 3. It would be a good set up for a future villan, not the prince himself not necessarily but him being a prince I assume means he is tied to important people who could try to make a play at Ken and the silver fangs later. Okay I tried not to be a dick not sure how well that went but those are my points at least off the top of my head.

michael thomas

This raid seems very similar to The Lost City of Tol'vir dungeon which was recently re-released in WoWs cata classic. Especially the Lockmaw boss fight.

Thomas Wilson

That you need to make so much of other people's critiques and go so far as calling it immature is telling. I default to all criticism as inherently useful especially when given by supporters. We're all supporters. And if we were reading a fantasy story with stakes and threats to the MC, that would be normal. In fact, it's almost as if that's what it's being compared to. I find it odd that you insist that those of us who "don't like it" don't have a perfectly valid reason for our sentiment when we're explicitly expressing why we dislike it. Who's acting like it's a massive thing with terrible consequences? No one here believes that which is why it deserves comment - stakes? Nope. Threat? Nope. Then what purpose did it serve? None! Extraneous. In some fiction, serious or otherwise, this is where 50 paragraphs might be written... Only for an editor to point out is unnecessary or can be redone, and a writer might make the pained. Decision to either cut out that work or redo it, especially if it's too much work and works against what they're going for. No one here is saying you're butt hurt.

NovaZero

God forbid you read an honest to God fantasy story with actual stakes and threats to the main characters I don't think you would survive

michael thomas

I'm not butthurt just annoyed you babies can't handle the hint of a possible shake up to the status quo I mean God you act like it was an earth shattering bet that held the lives of Ken's whole guild in the balance when it was literally nothing with no danger of anything Ken would have to self sabotage to lose and even if he did crimson would just paste the prince which is something she is clearly not going to get in trouble for stop being insecure about a minor not even plot point

michael thomas

People act like it was an entire massive thing that had terrible consequences when in reality it was a bet that didn't matter that had absolutley no stakes I'd say immature is appropriate

michael thomas

An internal bet of a reward from Crimson done in front of Albar and Albar trying to get in shifts the whole thing entirely to him just being a nuisance trying to get in on something that doesn't involve him. See how big a difference that is? And Neither Crimson nor Ken are staking their relationship and just adding a pressure where the reward is between the two of them (again, with an intruder). Shifts things entirely, yeah? Again, the only pain point here is that yes, we know it'll never happen... But then, what purpose does it serve other than to demean 2 of our leads? If something is introduced and doesn't serve any real point without any stake behind it, why are we doing it? In this case if there IS stake, then would that be acceptable? Nevermind that none of us even believe it. In the end it's just extraneous and takes away from the plot and our MCs. If they did it to goad the prince though, then that's something else. Weird and touching that NTR possibly but ehhhh

NovaZero

Reminds me of old video game raids =) Figuring it out as you go.

Mick

Normally the psychological part is what would make me avoid the revival tactic, but with this and the last few chapters deaths feel cheap. since the raid plans to wipe at least once per boss fight and most on people died on the way due to croc ambushes. Once death is no longer permanent and the pain of combat is inevitable the equation completely changes. Is the croc boss doing 60% damage over the course of its maul or 500%? Are the healer popping long cool down to keep the tank up? Is there some form of revival sickness? Should some dps other then the 4 tanks eat the maul since they are less important to the raids success. Does no one have a dodge ability to use on it. Is ONE healer casting rez instead of ALl the healers spamming heal safer? Really comes down to volunteers and how much more mana then a full heal it cost to rez. Really the rez mechanics have been vague or change throughout the book. Before the visit to the elven world death was risky and rez high lvl and rare now they are coman as dirt. Or at least that the impression I get with out rereading the whole series.

stormferret

I think this chapter was an attempt to correct the Felin mistake last chapter. It will probably get sorted out before going to full book format

Jacob

I’m sure the inconsistencies will be fixed/changed during editing before the finished version

Azazel

Addition: since there are varying strengths of revive skills it would stand to reason there are cheaper cost and faster/slower cast ones even if the latter haven’t been mentioned

Azazel

Revive typically doesn’t take long and the only variation I can think of his in strength, like how it took a particularly rare/strong one to revive Albars bodyguard after Crimson pasted him. About the other bit it was mentioned during the Dwarf invasion that reviving people costs far more mana then healing them to full, and at one point Ken mentioned that it’s always best to avoid deaths because of the psychological toll - I’m paraphrasing there but hope that answers your question 😉

Azazel

Either Bruce is phoning this one in or he has one too many ghost writers that failed to read the last book…

Jeremy Daniels

@ArbabSB I was only thinking of it fromm Ken being in the wrong and didnt consider Crimson being in the wrong. I get what youre saying now though. And while I would agree 100% if this was a real life situation, in this fictional situation where you have the writers intent and maybe just a poorly written/though out moment, I wouldnt let it ruin an otherwise good story/ character. Especially as aside from the 'pressure' the writer wanted to put on Ken, I dont think it will be to big of a point long term. I understand you point, I can see why it bothers you, and respect that. I just dont personally agree to how much it ruins, in this ficitional situation. I think it comes more down to the writing not using it roght then the character being in the wrong.

Allen Deck

I suspect it was supposed to be 'priestess' in which case 'her life' would be appropriate even in the general case. Yay language...

Aerlevsedi

This chapter was very good, but I'm still confused about how and when Felin showed up to join the raid, plus I still find the narrative a little... out of place, it seems like Bruce is holding back.

Sett

Agreed, since she wasn’t mentioned until this point. Even in the first boss fight.

David Hoerner

I'm more confused about how, where and when Felin joined them, it seems like something was skipped

Sett

It hasn't soured me on the story but I do feel like it's being used inappropriately. It's like an accidental fourth wall break, everyone in world knows that crimson's not going to go through with the bet except the idiot but because it's not real there's no add tension. Instead it just feels like a toxic relationship moment but that also hasn't been addressed which would have made for more relationship drama. So the whole thing just sort of feels flat and pointless to me like no relationship development and no actual stakes. So why bother!

stormferret

I feel like the CC is an element I'd like to see address better. Currently feels very inconsistent in it's usage. Like we have stuns in the first raid but only get brought up late. We have charm which was used like once only. Multiple knock backs (wind nicely used this chapter). Which all lead to something immersion breaking to me....they feel like total noobs right now and I don't just mean to the dungeon raid. Like this is a profession and life style to these people for Christ sake they're going to a top school dedicated to dungeon diving. As such they're planning feels inadequate and unprofessional. They have worked together multiple times yet still struggling with tank rotations, dedicated roles, pealing mob, skill rotations, kiting, and knowing what their teammates abilities are etc. I've seen more planning from high school sports teams so their age is not an excuse and and high school sports is not generally life-threatening or pain inducing like the dungeon diving is so I don't know why they don't seem to take this more seriously. Also leadership seems really shaky. I know this is here for character development but this should have happened earlier in the mini raids. so it really just feels like backsliding instead of development, which feeling unrealistic. Would make sense if the raid was randomized and they had to figure out the mechanics every fight but it's not random The bosses are consistent every time someone does the raid.

stormferret

So a chapter or two ago didn't it say they were raiding with only twenty-four people? Now Felin is here and they are back to 25? Great chapter though!

David Hoerner

One bit of editing: ..."I had never seen a priest run so fast in her life...." 'A priest' is general and 'her life' is specific. So, either 'I had never seen a priest run so fast in their life.' Or, 'I had never seen ( that / the ) priest run so fast in her life.'

Kestril

I think Nova's got an interesting idea. However it happens, I think they just might not all be wiped this round.

Kestril

Anyone remember if Bruce ever told how long the revival spell takes to cast and if there are multiple variations of the spell. Basically I'm wondering if it would be more practical to let the tank die during the boss grab and maul or the marked target. just preemptively start casting rez. It would save mana over all and prevent the boss and adds from just running off and avoiding the melee DPS have to chase them or lose out on valuable DPS time.

stormferret

I didn’t care for the bet either but with this being Bruce’s series there is no chance Albar the dickless wonder would win. He’ll likely try to cheat, ambushing Ken and dying. Knowing there’s zero chance Bruce would write Albar winning, to me it’s not a big plot point but just an extra motivation for Ken to push himself. It’s not worth giving up on an amazing series imo

Azazel

Next Ch: we find out that her dress got ruined. And that causes all mages and healers to throw out damage on top of healing and this ends with the boss dying sooner due very high DPS.

NovaZero

Could you define ‘bad’ in this instance please. I can see proper CC being both a boon and a hindrance to assassinations.

Iron Akela

Can you imagine how bad CC would be for assassinations? Edit: Charm counts doesn't it?

NovaZero

@Allan Deck. We've already considered all this and it doesn't help. Making a bet for yourself to leave your partner if they lose is a shitty thing to do to one's partner's regardless of how confident you are they will win, or if you're not planning to go through with it. if Crimson is willing to devalue her relationship to feed her training obsession, Ken should dump her and treat her as his trainer solely, as she is a shitty girlfriend. If Ken loses and Crimson kills the prince then to the entire adventurer community, Ken is a weasel who's word cannot be trusted, and who will hide behind Crimson to avoid having to keep his end of any stupid agreements he made. IMO it did the opposite of character development from Crimson. It totally ruined her as a love interest, and set back her romantic closeness with Ken. The relationship is just a stupid game to her. @michael thomas: People have legitimate reasons to not like this plot point and what it means for Ken and Crimson. You're the immature one for getting butthurt whenever it's brought up.

ArbabSB

What a fight!! Great chapter! Cleared up the whole Felin question and a touching moment for them. I would like to see more loot buuuut I admit, I’m biased there 😂. Looking forward to more!

Azazel

Yeah especially since how was he going to do this without Liminal Speed?

Jose Paz III

I get the idea of why you might be unhappy with it, but a few things to keep in mind. 1. The one who proposed the bet is a pos and the bet just added to that image. 2. Ken would have never agreed to it, if crimson hadnt forced him to. Shes using as a way to pressure ken to do better as she has done this whole time. 3. Even if the other guy wins, Crimson will kill him. Who is he to tell her what to do. I get why you might be upset, but it is a minor thing to take away from content that is looking to have some good character growth, and great moments.

Allen Deck

Gotta admit, these are some wicked bosses! Lots of mechanics going on, and the group doesn’t know them all yet. A good reflection of what happens in raids you don’t know, but that’s rough as there’s no digital avatars involved :o) I totally agree though, everyone who’s not a tank seems to have forgotten that sometimes you have to take a hit! It’s not that pleasant, but if you can’t take a few hits, and if you can’t hit back a little, you’re going to end up in trouble. I’m sure Crimson will find out, so there’ll be stamina training ahead!! Props to both Meredith and Myrtle though. Myrtle had a nasty surprise and seemed to keep her head, and Meredith acted with swiftness. Sounds like this group needs some polearm users to really lay the smack down on those packs of crocodiles. And more traditional CC (which seems to be lacking in the DD universe, for very understandable reasons)

Iron Akela

This is a great boss fight, to many litrpg fights are boring

Val the mysterious Jedi

What I like is how Raid difficulty is a thing. I love how in MMOs it's actually very telling for how many members a raid gets the coordination can get it's CRAZY

NovaZero

Immature? That's an interesting critique.

NovaZero

Both of you should probably not be reading this if you are that immature jesus

michael thomas

Yeah, same. I totally lost investment in Ken's story because of that stupid bet. I'm just killing time till we get to the other 2 stories, especially Returner's Defiance.

ArbabSB

And she was the one who got the epic dress everyone was fighting over so in theory she is top tier in terms of gear.

Lynderyn

Yeah not going to lie the "bet" kinda soured the raid for me and im just speed reading the chapters not really caring about the raid 🤷‍♂️

CesarC.

Seems like it. Meredith might have panicked at being picked, but at least she ran like the wind after little prompting rather than freezing. Shame she cornered herself. Harley definitely needs to pamper her after that.

Jamie R

This is why Crimson started off their education having everyone, healers included, fight a monster 1 on 1. Seems more from the other classes need that lesson.

Jacob

Oh, a sweet moment with the girls before chaos ensues. But holy damn, these raid bosses are no joke! I mean I've done a few video game raids and some of those fights are insane and intense, but these guys are... 😮😖🤯 I see now why they said you need to experience the boos fight first with no expectations of winning. Wonder how many of the class will drop out after this? Healers are too soft, with the exception of Charlotte, and the ranges DPS panic too easily. It's alright to specialise to your class, but having some all rounding to your basic defense and melee combat isn't a bad idea. Feel sorry for some of them if Crimson learns about any of this... Her training will be worse than hell.

Jamie R


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