Started Dating - CH 09 (4)
Added 2024-11-23 03:04:31 +0000 UTC
Comments
I really want to enjoy this story, but it just seems very disjointed. The progression from chapter is lacking and there’s a very mechanical feel to the artwork. The emotions don’t come through. Hopefully, as the story progresses, the author will get better. I wish them all the best, and I will continue to read.
Torredog
2024-11-23 07:52:50 +0000 UTC
