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[18+] [M4F] - Long Take (Full Cut) - [NSFW] [against the wall] [playful] [fingering] [pussy slaps] [cowgirl] [bickering] [film students] [labmates] [enemies to friends] [half clothed] [Ta-daa!] [blowjob] [cum] lots of [Tom laughing a lot]
Added 2021-07-12 05:02:37 +0000 UTC18+ JULY | Was going for a more minimalist, hyperreal style. Acting without you knowing I'm acting. The tempo is slower, and they are a little clumsy. This is filled with industry slang, filmmaking mostly, knowing the terms doesn't matter, I just wanted you to be charmed by themI hope you enjoy it!
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Tom!! :D This audio is so fun. When I read the description, I was assuming the characters would bicker about something from class, not that we’d get a narration of the camera angles/shots! And you managed to not make a double entendre about “I’m pushing in” so nice restraint, lol. I was actually giggling out loud throughout - not just at the terminology but the dialogue, the situation, everything. It felt very sincere. Spicy but sweet - very on brand. Also, “You’re gonna let me do this, aren’t you?” was really hot. Oh! And the hard (audio) cut! What an ending. Loved it.
Anna G.
2021-07-12 21:33:58 +0000 UTCThis audio is amazing, I really really love it! One of the things I really enjoyed is how realistic the sex part in this situation felt. The little awkwardness, the giggles, the care. The condom, asking for consent and making sure the listener enjoys it too made me just so happy. Those are sadly not common things in real life anymore so I really enjoyed those parts. When the music started at your cue I got really excited, it was just incredible and the ending just chefskiss! Your laughs tho! It made me giggle and grin and it was just adorable! Your laughs brought my instant serotonin! Since it's late I will keep it at that but again amazing audio! You did a great job again!
Roan
2021-07-12 20:49:37 +0000 UTCTom. I have a lot to say about this but also words are hard. I listened to this immediately after I got the notification and decided to use it as an excuse to take a well-needed break from homework. I love all your audios, I really do; the main reason I liked this one has already been said probably multiple times but I'd like to reiterate it. As a college student, I loved that this character is supposed to be college-age because that's MY age, and the fact that you did it this way kind of gave me a new way to appreciate it, if that makes sense? It felt more realistic and more relatable because he got clearly a bit flustered when he found out the listener actually *did* want to have sex or when he wasn't completely sure what to do or how things were going to go. I think what some people don't really factor in when it comes to portraying someone around this age is that age does not automatically mean experience. I liked that this audio had a certain degree of innocence and awkwardness in some places because that's exactly what it's like for a lot of people in their early-20s. Also? The constant consent checks were amazing, beautiful, chef's kiss, I loved them. And I saw your reply to a comment above where you said you re-recorded this FOUR times? This is over an HOUR long and you re-recorded it that many times? I can't describe how much I love that you spend the time to perfect your art as much as possible and how *good* you are at improv. It's easy to tell how much you love what you do and you love your community because it shows in all of your work, not just on here but on Youtube and Twitch as well. TomBanter, you never cease to amaze me.
Panda
2021-07-12 19:38:11 +0000 UTCI'm very glad you appreciated a lot of the stuff i took care to tuck in there! maybe we'll revisit these two later, hmmm?
Tombanter
2021-07-12 19:01:01 +0000 UTCHappy birthday~
Tombanter
2021-07-12 19:00:06 +0000 UTClol mostly basic stuff, tried not to say anything too geeky
Tombanter
2021-07-12 18:59:12 +0000 UTCi'm happy you enjoyed this and appreciated all of the effort i took to create the things you noticed! i re-recorded this thing 4 times and was just going off script into improv by the end of capture, because I'd listen to it and it just sounded too... "sex god" like you say. I didn't want that. I wanted someone who felt real. ^^
Tombanter
2021-07-12 18:58:46 +0000 UTCLoved this, especially the industry slang. I might've been looking stuff up as I listened.
raetgw
2021-07-12 18:10:29 +0000 UTCSo Thomas, I really liked this audio. I liked that the speaker was a little awkward and nervous? It was a nice change of pace; it felt very realistic. I know that the audios are supposed to be fantasy, but it's nice to get one where the speaker isn't some sort of sex god that just knows all the right things to say and do, especially when this character is supposed to be college-aged. It felt very cute and sweet, while still being really hot. I'm not sure if that's something everyone will be into, but it felt very genuine. Your first time having sex with someone (especially someone you've known platonically for a while) is a little awkward and clumsy, and I feel like you captured that really well. I also really like what you did with the music and the ending! When you talk about how this is where they would cue the soundtrack and then the music starts!!! I loved that so much! It felt like a movie scene! but maybe a little more meta because the characters are aware they're in a movie lol. I also loved the ending where you talk about it fading to black and then how all of the sfx and everything stops after you say "cut"! I geeked out over that a little bit cause I thought it was super cool!!! Aside from the steamy aspect of it (which I definitely enjoyed), I really just liked the way the story unfolds in this and how artistic (?) it felt. My background is in math and psychology, so I don't have the right words to describe all the artsy stuff lol. I think ultimately, the character felt super genuine, like I could go onto a college campus and meet this guy. I like how he shifts from seeming super confident and in control when he's insuiating that maybe they'll have sex, but once he realizes that the listener is on board and it's actually happening, he gets kind of flustered! I feel like I'm rambling, and I think it's cause I don't have the right words to describe what I'm thinking! Ultimately, I really enjoyed it! The character felt super super realistic, and I loved the artistic feel (?) of the audio. I also love all of the banter, and the humor was *chef's kiss*! There were times I giggled, but I don't think it was distracting or took away from the spice.
Whatsacheryl
2021-07-12 17:40:23 +0000 UTCThose are all great suggestions! I'll add them ~
Tombanter
2021-07-12 16:42:25 +0000 UTCi love the clumsiness, because that's ow first times goes right? And i loved the film making aspect, it made me smile through out the whole audio. You are so talented! Your stories are always so good.
Jen
2021-07-12 13:02:04 +0000 UTCLoved this, especially since it’s my birthday and I couldn’t have asked for a better, albeit unintentional, present 😂
elfeera
2021-07-12 12:03:20 +0000 UTCi can't seem to reply to ur comment Tom, but some tags i was thinking of while listening were: [against the wall], [playful], [fingering], [pussy slaps], and [cowgirl]. ur the (very talented) artist, so these are just my personal suggestions 🙈
sammy.mk
2021-07-12 09:58:40 +0000 UTCTom! This was SOOO good!! The BANTER-banter is perfectly on point and I loved how it made me flip flop between full outbursts of laughter and impossible to contain smirks and even giggles…and I do not consider myself someone who typically “giggles”, but your laughs really are infectious, Tom. I loved the discussion of camera angles throughout the whole thing and the director’s notes. This entire concept was super cute and fun to listen to. Plus, I’ve said it before but I’ll say it again, “Tom Banter: making consent confirmation and checking in with your partner sexy AF”. I love this so much. I felt the backstory regarding his previous relationship was a great addition to this version. I liked the additional insight into his situation. Oh! The whole condom fiasco…. major real world problems! LOL And lastly, I thought the ending was perfect! I loved it! I could picture the whole thing, with the slow dolly out. The abrupt cut of your audio when you say cut made me smile the way you do when you finish watching a really good movie for the first time and you’re so happy you saw it and can’t wait to talk to your friends about it.🌷💜
Miss_Please_N_ThankU
2021-07-12 09:28:53 +0000 UTCOoh! Which tags do you think the title might benefit from?
Tombanter
2021-07-12 09:21:35 +0000 UTCvery much enjoyed, especially the consent and the Tomlaughter! just wish there were a few more tags describing the audio in the description :)
sammy.mk
2021-07-12 09:02:48 +0000 UTCAaah, the Great Condom Conundrum. What would this lovely little film we've made be titled, I wonder?
Robin Laufeyson
2021-07-12 08:25:06 +0000 UTCThis was an interesting audio, it was very creative!
Doses of M.O. Sass
2021-07-12 07:21:25 +0000 UTCGood job. Good Hussle.
PeePer
2021-07-12 06:51:27 +0000 UTCDon't know why this made me giggle almost uncontrollably! Funny and sweet. ❤
ThatFreakingBrenda
2021-07-12 06:39:20 +0000 UTC
