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Added 2024-03-24 21:55:48 +0000 UTCInterludes everywhere! Almost 30K. I tried to g
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Today's chapter clears the doubt - Tamzar is very much alive ))
Maxim
2024-05-20 05:22:54 +0000 UTCIs he even alive?
James Smith
2024-05-17 23:31:54 +0000 UTCLet's see if a new chapter is coming in 20th *this* month
Maxim
2024-05-17 23:26:28 +0000 UTCHow he copies powers is still a secret, in fact)) I was referring to Armsmaster's introduction on him >Void Cowboy is not a simple Trump as he claimed initially on his online debut, nor a grab-bag inspired by nearby Capes like he has hinted at in the past when questioned on his sightings and powersets in person and online So Greg already said to Armsmaster that he's a power copier, so Armsmaster shouldn't be refuting this. On the other side, maybe off screen Void Cowboy really implied he's just a grab-bag, and in this briefing Armsmaster tells he isn't for Wards who only know of Void Cowboy from PHO.
Maxim
2024-05-17 23:09:12 +0000 UTCYep. A pity that
James Smith
2024-05-03 00:38:50 +0000 UTCHis nature as a power copier isn't a secret, how he copies powers is. Whether he's like a discount Eidolon in the same way Glory Girl is Discount Alexandria is under question.
The Panda Queen
2024-05-02 21:10:46 +0000 UTCSeems not
The Panda Queen
2024-05-02 21:08:09 +0000 UTCIs new chapter coming in 20th this month, like previous chapters?
James Smith
2024-04-17 21:11:05 +0000 UTCAnother slight inconsistency, with Ward interlude. In Chapter 11, while in Canberra, Greg already told to Armsmaster about his power copier power. >Indirectly, I suppose. I’m actually a Trump of sorts. Every now and then I get weak copies or variants of powers from people that I’m around, with the powers usually being stronger the more those people like me. >I had a run-in with Panacea previously and managed to get a weak version of her Striker power Then in Chapter 15 Greg mentions his power-copying to Sophia. So Greg's nature as a power copier is not a secret.
Maxim
2024-03-27 10:23:05 +0000 UTCHmmm, not exactly ideal but I can accept that for less than €4/month
fireball77
2024-03-26 13:48:40 +0000 UTCGlory Girl will be the most pronounced case, I think. It will end up in NTR no mater what tho, since they are an active couple with real feelings. Also, you forgot the new wave first generation - Carol and her sister with their husbands. Same issue there. BTW, how many challenges did Greg pass with Panacea? 3/7?
James Smith
2024-03-25 15:32:07 +0000 UTCLooks like it's either one or two months, depending on if he writes something else in-between.
TroubleFait
2024-03-25 14:24:55 +0000 UTCAnother chapter, another banger. I'd have much to comment on, there are so many little details to appreciate, but that'd be way too long so I'll publish that on QQ next month. Just have to say, I was sure Taylor knew about Void being Greg.
TroubleFait
2024-03-25 14:20:57 +0000 UTCSay, what's the usual time between posting chapters?
fireball77
2024-03-25 10:24:13 +0000 UTCContessa did say that she'd leak some of how his power works to the PRT It's not like they know about the Master/Stranger component of his powers, and *maybe* they will but Greg will be too powerful for anyone to fuck with by that point anyway
fireball77
2024-03-25 10:23:19 +0000 UTCNow I gotta go back and check. This chapter makes it seem like Cauldron gave him the power and were aware since Day 0 - but that begs the question of what happened during the Simurgh fight. Maybe Doctor Mother was horny and begging for some Greg time?
Bertram Biggles
2024-03-25 03:35:17 +0000 UTCWhoops, that convo seems like an obvious place to check in hindsight. Just swapped it to "a few days". Cheers
Sam T
2024-03-25 02:49:49 +0000 UTCHm, the endgame will definitely be genderbending. I'm still a bit undecided as to how to approach the canon couples while they are in progress. I suppose from a meta perspective I could just have Greg blast through them so that it doesn't matter, but if I let it flow naturally then there's certainly going to be a point where one half of the couple is in the bag and the other is... not. Glory Girl/Gallant is probably the most likely offender on that front, but I can't entirely rule out others - Othala/Viktor, Kaiser/Purity (does that count?) and, as you say, Assault/Battery. I don't think I would want to really drag out the NTR-ish plotline, but... I can't see Greg holding back to spare the 'other' guys feelings either. So, maybe don't expect a huge focus on it or the full sissification experience - but the possibility of a few other halves feeling a little inadequate or being unable to hold on to 'their' girlfriends might come up in the future.
Sam T
2024-03-25 02:36:13 +0000 UTC>>“Sure, but there’s a difference between throwing me into a cell with crippled Capes and hoping I win and telling me the names of a few Capes that would really help me out later on.” I tilt my head out towards the likely direction of the fight in the city, even if I couldn’t see it that was there the fliers were coming from earlier. “The stronger I get, the more likely I can help with that. The faster that happens, the better it is – right? If you aren’t scared of me getting too strong, then why not try a few things to make me as fast as possible. You only had me for about a day, we could experiment a bit more.” Found this during Contessa's conversation with Greg
Sesquame
2024-03-25 02:32:29 +0000 UTCI absolutely loved the reveal that Greg had already subverted Doctor Mom and Cauldron. I absolutely did not even consider the idea that Contessa was lying through her teeth about Greg not having won any challenges.
Sesquame
2024-03-25 02:31:09 +0000 UTCYou're not crazy! I was writing the interlude and figured, "Hey - stretching this out would be way more fun". So I edited chapter 1 and just rolled with it. Don't think I mentioned it all that much anywhere else, so hopefully thats the only edit that was needed to make it fix.
Sam T
2024-03-25 02:26:10 +0000 UTCAm I crazy or was the cauldron stay only a weekend before? I went to check and it's a full week but it says edited on thursday. Also I very much noticed Path to Victory working towards turning greg into a lolicon.
Sesquame
2024-03-25 01:53:43 +0000 UTCHey Tamzar! No clue if you do suggestions or if you have any plans for writing femboy content, so feel free to shoot this down, but I just thought that since Assault and Battery are a pair, it'd make for an interesting side plot to sissify Assault and undermine his manhood as Greg pursues Battery. Just a suggestion, though judging by how you handled Leet I guess Gender bending is most likely.
The Panda Queen
2024-03-25 01:11:37 +0000 UTCThe Greglluminati is real and I both love and hate it.
Guy Incognito
2024-03-25 00:53:14 +0000 UTCShame on no Emma/ Anne action
Tal
2024-03-25 00:41:03 +0000 UTCJust came from QQ, really loving this story
fireball77
2024-03-25 00:11:21 +0000 UTCWow. That was a lot more serious worldbuilding than I expected. Cauldron makes a lot of sense, though. A pity we didn't get Vicky, but Panacea is a good stepping stone to get the best girl. Protectorate knowing of his real power is a bit concerning. Vista as a POV? Is she going to join the action? Emma's sister on sister action sounds promising. Overall, great job. Thank you for writing it.
James Smith
2024-03-24 23:29:04 +0000 UTC
