Duellist 20
Added 2023-12-22 16:02:00 +0000 UTCAN: 28k words. This went a little off-topic, no
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Considering Greg's shard is big on simulations, it can simulate the world where new character has required social interaction with Greg, locate most glaring inconsistency and rewrite it. Repeat several thousand times, and the world is updated to new state with minimal real effort required. But if there were a lot of inconsistencies, then some less important ones that exceed world rewrite limit are still left standing.
Maxim
2023-12-26 22:20:55 +0000 UTCYeah, exactly what I was talking about. Sure, Cauldron put an explanation in system that Greg adapts his behaviour to be more likeable to victim, sorry target. But genderbending completely contradicts that. And Greg also was thinking about it when he genderbent that Nazi who was hitting on Claire. And by the way, there are two unaffiliated powerful Thinkers in Brockton Bay - Tattletale and Coil. And maybe Coil would be even more afraid of this happening than Tattletale ;-)
Maxim
2023-12-26 22:07:39 +0000 UTCOnce again showing that the admin shards are the scariest when dealing with big, dumb supercomputers. The other shards 'testing' Greg to see if he's worthy of their power is extremely interesting -- given that Greg himself has apparently given his own shard terminal online brain rot. I mean, seriously? Tempting him with videogames and harems? Yeesh. The other Worms will never stop making fun of Eden's corpse when they find out. It does raise the vaguely interesting question of how exactly this universal manipulation is enacted if it's within the bounds of shard-power. It's not hard to believe they could just re-write all of the planet, but shards are also inclined to conserve energy. What I'm saying is that Greg is clearly drooling in a char somewhere while his shard runs simulations rather than letting him actually alter reality! Looking forward to fully converting the dynamic duo, if only to spite that one chatter for whom Greg is media-NTRing.
n0us
2023-12-26 19:25:42 +0000 UTCFinally finished reading this chapter. Sooo hot, and cute, with Sophia. Really enjoyed the banter at the start too, and well done with Leet, that was creative. Merry Christmas, thanks for the present!
TroubleFait
2023-12-24 13:22:56 +0000 UTCCauldron already knows so Watchdog won't be as sharp as they could in investigating this. But yeah, the ticking bomb timer started. Plus, unaffiliated Thinkers are a thing.
TroubleFait
2023-12-24 13:20:33 +0000 UTCHonestly, the technical quality of this story really elevates it past simple smut. The morbid nature of his Trump powers actually fits the Wormverse pretty well. I’d put forward that this is your most impressive work technically speaking - you ought to focus it.
fargo717
2023-12-24 01:12:41 +0000 UTCLeet gives off major Futaba vibes, which is great because Futaba is awesome.
Bertram Biggles
2023-12-23 14:37:40 +0000 UTC《After I've reached a good point to stop with that, **maybe at the end of a school year** or when my muse runs dry in new material - Duellist and a second chapter of MAD will be the next chapters to come out after that.》 When you talk about a school year here I thought it was an IRL school year. So I got scared for a minute!
TroubleFait
2023-12-22 22:53:36 +0000 UTCSophia shit was hoooot Leet is adorable though, already can’t wait for her next appearance.
hahahacker
2023-12-22 22:32:16 +0000 UTCLeet's power really, really doesn't like him. Usually. This version just sucks at explaining what it wants. An interesting take for sure. Also, lol. Greg's power applied compatibility layer to Leet's power. And it applied compatibility layer to Leet. BTW, this is exactly what he worried Thinkers might pick up, and Leet is not a random civilian.
Maxim
2023-12-22 21:29:59 +0000 UTCI WANT MORE!! MOAAAAARRR
The Panda Queen
2023-12-22 18:50:21 +0000 UTCThis is a nice Christmas present.
Josh Snider
2023-12-22 16:05:08 +0000 UTC
