Duellist 19
Added 2023-10-15 01:18:20 +0000 UTCAN: 32K words lets goooo! Bit later than I want
Comments
This is amazing. Just amazing.
James Smith
2023-10-20 08:55:30 +0000 UTCThis was really fantastic. One nitpick: I know Greg is supposed to be terminally online, and furthermore this story isn't exactly trying to be a period piece, but him saying "copium" was a little strange. The other internet slang he uses, tsundere, onahole etc. was already extant by the time this takes place so it makes sense. "Copium" is less than four years old and this is supposed to be 2011.
Heyoyo
2023-10-18 01:21:01 +0000 UTCYup, and this is exactly why I decided to pay you, such high quality work deserves a reward(and I'm totally not absolutely fiending for more)
The Panda Queen
2023-10-17 02:07:59 +0000 UTCReading this wasn't just the highlight of my day, at 32,000 words it was my entire day.
Josh Snider
2023-10-16 00:09:09 +0000 UTCThis story truly is the stuff of legends. The character interactions are so compelling, I could read just for the banter. When you add all the unhinged violence, the marvellous sex, getting to know the characters inside out, and of course Greg's completely mental inner (and outer) monologue... When I see a new chapter, it's the best figurative meal of my day.
TroubleFait
2023-10-15 21:39:41 +0000 UTCThumbs up! Sophia is fucked, she just doesn't know it yet. Looking up to fight with Sophia even more than to the result. Also, a side thought. This setup kinda reminds me of Persona games at this point, where you fight in imaginary realms and levelup confidante social links. Except in vanilla Persona and in official thinker report, player levels up social link to get better in imaginary fighting, not the other way around.
Maxim
2023-10-15 21:20:47 +0000 UTCCasually dropping 32k like a madman, thanks again for the chap!
James French
2023-10-15 05:09:27 +0000 UTC
