Kartoon Warz #4 update
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One thing I would like to discuss is about the graphical violence for this story. In the last panel of this batch you can see a character receiving a really hard punch. I had three choices:
-Making it very gruesome, teeth and blood flying from the mouth.
-Making a very deformed and funny face, eyes popping out like a tom and jerry cartoon
-Or making them moan and sweat a lot, still keeping the faces beautiful and sexy.
I chose the third and a bit of the second. Of course, it loses a lot of impact, but I can use the 1st choice for some key moments. What do you think of all this?
Comments
Agree, it fits the theme after all.
ReddyHeart
2025-08-02 13:18:46 +0000 UTCYeah, you are right, some cosmetic damage like a bloody nose or some thin blood drips on the corner of the mouths is alright.
ReddyHeart
2025-08-02 13:18:01 +0000 UTCI think your current choice is good enough. In my opinion, you don't need to make it overly gruesome, though a bloody nose every now and then can help convey the idea of damage being done. As for spelling/grammar mistakes, there's only one I could find: "I spent 8 hours in a beauty salon yesterday..."
Niccab
2025-08-01 19:30:55 +0000 UTCCartoons can withstand incredible damage, lose some teeth, break some bones, and still be fine in the next shot. I say keep it cartoony/sexy regardless of the violence.
Joey Fernandez
2025-08-01 18:51:01 +0000 UTC
