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(The postscript is a one-shot translation of Deepl.The nuance may have changed slightly.)


Thank you for your support.


It was a bit late.

But since it was midnight on the 3rd of last month, it feels like I'm a little behind?

I also feel like I might have just carried over the delay from the rough draft stage...


But it was two pages longer, and overall, I feel like I spent more time per page.

If I can keep up the same pace as this month, maybe I can get back to posting daily by early November.

Well, that might not hold true if I increase the volume again.


The content is a Sister & Succubus story.

The world setting is a fantasy-like alternate world where demons and humans are at war.

Trying to make the plot a bit more intricate resulted in too many characters and settings, so it might be too packed for a short story.

Making it intricate is fine, but trying to cram in as much setting as possible probably wasn't the best approach.

I need to streamline it more, at least reduce it in the dialogue.


Maybe I should cut one or two situations and increase the density per one, or create scenes that are a bit more lingering.

I also feel like I want to draw a bit more carefully, so I'd like to try the pattern of cutting down the page count and increasing the time spent per page at least once.


Anyway, moving on to the next PP update.

The second aspect of the Alien's post-transformation biology.

I plan to upload the rough draft within the month. If I can make it, it should be up by the 16th.

That's all for now.


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