The Heart Grows Ch. 180
Added 2025-02-20 07:11:42 +0000 UTCA check-in with the army on their march, and then the reveal to a populace who their new champion is. I'm sure everything will go fine.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kPsDEHQZKBP2NsCl3PeQUMEStK8rjcHYGAsKOKBPeJE/edit?usp=sharing
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You could imagine it, though. Flying along, temps are about half what they are at ground level—suddenly a warm breeze pouring up around you like a cozy blanket, and all you need to do it balance on your wings and it will keep flowing.
Damaged
2025-02-21 08:56:45 +0000 UTCThere would be many thousands packed into that city square. Probably bordering on 10x more people there than "monsters" in Breeze.
Damaged
2025-02-20 16:01:33 +0000 UTCNope. That's her not continuing. Maybe I should put a note there.
Damaged
2025-02-20 15:59:08 +0000 UTCHeart is going to do great things! is there a missing bit here?: They murmur my name and they sound
HereForHFY
2025-02-20 13:42:57 +0000 UTCLovely! Some of the edit suggestions are weird as usual. "Is this implying there are more people in polfay than creatures in Breeze", no, it said "more PEOPLE than she's seen before." And yes it meant People not creatures, and yes there is more than a 'population of zero' "people" in Breeze. Like, we Just had a chapter that showed us Breeze has nearly 1,000 workers. C'mon. Where do you think the dryad came from
Purpleninja
2025-02-20 13:07:06 +0000 UTCIt's a small thing, but I'm tickled by the characterization of updrafts as "cozy".
Andrew Denton
2025-02-20 12:06:19 +0000 UTC
