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The Challenge App: Day 4 [Text Only]

Things don't go as planned for Ollie today, and Nadia is just getting started...

The Challenge App: Day 4 [Text Only]

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Like I said before a artifact with a brain

Cynel

You make a great point, that if the TF is meant to be slow this would be a longer story. It could be that in his desperation, Ollie decides to just do a bunch of hard challenges in a row to earn more gems and either buy himself a way out, or be permanently altered and stuck. I'd also wager that our dear author, JohnManTD has a few tricks and twists up his sleeve. That's just my two cents. โค๏ธ

Sean Rennie

I liked this chapter a lot, but again the question, how many chapters are you planning for this story. After you wrote this the Challenge app will only for this month stay a main story I assume the story will be concluded on day 6 which might a bit fast for a slow tf story. ๐Ÿค”

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