The Swapping Device - Ch. 09
Added 2025-04-04 01:40:55 +0000 UTCOkay this is a LONG one. I really wanted to flesh out the world and lore a lot more with this one, but I included a very sexy scene at the end.
I hope you like it!
Comments
that’s so kind! ❤️ this little side project has been so much fun to experiment with and i’m glad there are people out there who are enjoying it
John
2025-04-06 13:00:15 +0000 UTCThe immediate name slip in front of Bill is amusing but concerning. His artifact sounds akin to The Boob Note /The Death Note but without limitations? He says his has limits but its implied that it wouldn't given how he speaks about the world. As much as I'm a BE enthusiast, I do think this device/story is the more interesting one. Even if I'm not personally into all of the shenanigans it's caused. Anyway, just wanted to leave some general writing praise. The best stories usually grip you because there's more to offer than smut, and though it's highly sexual it doesn't excuse poor structure or characterization in writings. While I can't financially justify support every month I do hope you keep writing.
ktc
2025-04-04 10:30:45 +0000 UTC
