Café Exposé - 17
Added 2019-05-31 21:56:34 +0000 UTCand with that I finally managed to write and draw this comic page X) 2 very long days for me as I was stuck on how to show this page without it becoming 2 to 3 pages. but my, do I like this page now >:3 and I have good plans for the next ones as well.
that being said, next up will be a week of writing comic pages, because I completely ran out of my backlog.
have a good weekend everyone!
Comments
Oh man, to be stripped like that in public and made to serve people nude is so awesome. Great comic page. I love the progression of panels. Bookending the top with the little clothing he was wearing, then stretching him out lengthwise in the second row was inspired. (I love Cass's tent.) The last panel doesn't look like it was easy, but having everyone look at the viewer, putting them in Emil's place, so good. Thank you!
Tygepc
2019-06-01 22:37:50 +0000 UTCOmigosh I love this page! The commentary is great too!
Otterbutter
2019-06-01 17:16:52 +0000 UTCah yeah true XD adding the red is like the last thing I do, I should change it up a little
Funkybun
2019-06-01 06:55:21 +0000 UTC>:3 not if I have a crush first.. wait
Funkybun
2019-06-01 06:53:35 +0000 UTCyes! thankyouu XD I am really happy with this one, thankyou thankyou thankyou
Funkybun
2019-06-01 06:53:04 +0000 UTCthere is atleast 1 or 2 pages before I can branch off again, I hope to be making a vote for it then. I do require some extra writing on my part as my original written plan kinda fell appart in making it. what happened was: in my plan this page was something like page 13, but it was impossible to make the story move that fast but yeah, next week I will focus on writing, an I hope to make a vote too if I can :3
Funkybun
2019-06-01 06:51:17 +0000 UTCIf I may offer a small suggestion: draw the blush on the character's cheeks before drawing the glasses. Otherwise the glasses end up red.
2019-06-01 05:53:32 +0000 UTCI think I have a crush on Emil.
Nocturne Duskclaw
2019-06-01 03:51:40 +0000 UTCFish nets :D
Totoroben
2019-06-01 01:18:09 +0000 UTCThis is the best page ever (so far)! I don't know if I'm more jealous of Emil for getting undressed by Lily in front of others, or Lily for getting to undress Emil in front of others. This is the perfect blend of exhibitionism, voyeurism, and enf all rolled into the cutest fucking art style the furry fandom's ever seen. I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it!
Patrigue
2019-06-01 01:14:13 +0000 UTCWill you be doing a vote on what happens next?
CPU Sivrag
2019-05-31 23:32:45 +0000 UTCLove how this is going.
Lord Chaos
2019-05-31 22:31:25 +0000 UTCI had to scroll back up to see if Emil's dick was dangling into the second panel. It wasn't, but I laughed anyway.
Maplesoftfox
2019-05-31 22:25:48 +0000 UTCThat's a great layout.
Maplesoftfox
2019-05-31 22:25:03 +0000 UTCyess!! >:3
Funkybun
2019-05-31 22:02:03 +0000 UTCOh my oh my!
SenGrisane
2019-05-31 21:58:30 +0000 UTC
