bathing minotaur final stretch
Added 2019-10-19 23:54:23 +0000 UTCok got all the pages 99% done. just need to go over them one more time and then finish the cover and i can publish and move on to finishing Demon Quest
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ok i will try to do better
Hatton Slayden
2019-10-21 18:31:28 +0000 UTCMhhh, one thing I can't help notice repeatedly and which I wanted to critisize is that you tend to skimp on detail on the guys tool in these colored pics. And I mean, yes, they aren't the main focus here, your focus is the exotic females, which is fine, but somehow when I see a detailless, one colored wang it kinda takes me out of the action, after all the dude is basically the guy the male reader "puts themselves into", the one he empathizes with. I would suggest coloring the glans/head of the penis in this and future pics/comics with a darker purple/pink/fleshy color. That would go a long way.
Busterdrag
2019-10-20 13:53:04 +0000 UTCi mean... it's not like this has not been in the making for 10 months. We can wait. BUT NOT MUCH MORE! Plz. Finish it. 😭👍💖
Simone Spinozzi
2019-10-20 01:50:39 +0000 UTC
