demon quest with dialouge now
Added 2019-05-18 22:59:44 +0000 UTChttps://www.dropbox.com/sh/91kedo9yhzqxdvi/AACwJ5GKdmC9f_EjCC_q4tPia?dl=0
prepare for the cringe!! but seriously i hope the dialogue does not suck
now i need to get all the pages refined enough for coloring
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right oh. once i get the line work done i will make those corrections. and i am glad you don't find my dialogue "cringy"
Hatton Slayden
2019-05-19 23:12:47 +0000 UTCsent the above by mistake incomplete... soooo yeah... the complete is above. ๐ ๐
Simone Spinozzi
2019-05-19 05:48:34 +0000 UTC*he's got a fucking business to get donw* ... *coguh* sooo let's see... page 5: โข brave<i><b>d</b></i> many a challenge โข grant <strike><b><i>e</i></b></strike>me page 7: perfect answer... also, get "top 10", specifically the porter businass chapter, that chessman horse has a perfect soliloquy. ๐๐ page 11: it reads "better come, my herald" it should read something along the lines of "this is better... come my herald" buuut it might also be that you wanted the double entendre... page 13: t<b><i>ha</i></b>t part page 14: ... .... ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐โค page 17: here's him doing an A-10 aeromorph impression.... you know... <i>*brrrrrrt!*</i> ๐คฃ๐ page 26: ... .... ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐โค
Simone Spinozzi
2019-05-19 05:34:19 +0000 UTC
