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demon quest with dialouge now

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/91kedo9yhzqxdvi/AACwJ5GKdmC9f_EjCC_q4tPia?dl=0

prepare for the cringe!! but seriously i hope the dialogue does not suck

now i need to get all the pages refined enough for coloring  

demon quest with dialouge now

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right oh. once i get the line work done i will make those corrections. and i am glad you don't find my dialogue "cringy"

Hatton Slayden

sent the above by mistake incomplete... soooo yeah... the complete is above. ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ‘

Simone Spinozzi

*he's got a fucking business to get donw* ... *coguh* sooo let's see... page 5: โ€ข brave<i><b>d</b></i> many a challenge โ€ข grant <strike><b><i>e</i></b></strike>me page 7: perfect answer... also, get "top 10", specifically the porter businass chapter, that chessman horse has a perfect soliloquy. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘ page 11: it reads "better come, my herald" it should read something along the lines of "this is better... come my herald" buuut it might also be that you wanted the double entendre... page 13: t<b><i>ha</i></b>t part page 14: ... .... ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ‘โค page 17: here's him doing an A-10 aeromorph impression.... you know... <i>*brrrrrrt!*</i> ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ‘ page 26: ... .... ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ‘โค

Simone Spinozzi


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