the details seemed flat and lifeless. adding a bit more curves and putting her hands where more of her body can be seen make teh page a bit more dynamic
Hatton Slayden
2019-03-01 12:17:43 +0000 UTC
i see... but why were they annoying to you? The way i see it you moved some hair around, removed some muscles on the ladies, and changed what one lady was strapping and how the hands on the helmet on the last panel were placed... that seems like weird choices to warrant a whole redraw.