Bad Hypno Haiku.
Added 2020-01-10 23:24:51 +0000 UTCI've written some bad haiku. Please enjoy ;)
Ask me for a trance
Kindly, nicely, thoughtfully
I just might do it
Deep Sleep? I ask you
Your mind wants it to happen,
so you sink right down
Make the trance you ask
of me, better than you thought
share what's deep inside
beg for pleasure. Drop
forget you asked.Snap! Wake up.
Do it all again
you want to go deep
open your mind for me now
it's stunning inside
close your eyes relax
spirals burned into your mind
wide for suggestion
drop drop to my words
sink sink to the brink. comply
Deeply unconscious.
Comments
I get stopped at Deep Sleep in the second stanza.
Charles Valentine
2020-01-12 13:42:20 +0000 UTCBetter than any Haiku I heard in "our man in Japan"
christopher wilco
2020-01-11 19:48:31 +0000 UTC
