Part 11 feedback
Added 2020-12-05 17:19:13 +0000 UTCWhat did you guys think about this one? I wanted to make this a Tombstone focused story to build him up a little more for the inevitable confrontation with Maddy. I also wanted a domination sex scene between these 2 muscular human beings :)) Tell me your thoughts below!
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Really enjoyed it! Getting the bad guy fleshed out some is always welcome. If I may offer some more general feedback, I'd love more detailed descriptions of the characters physiques. I personally love reading descriptions and even measurements of muscle sizes.
FfejL
2020-12-06 15:55:36 +0000 UTC
