Undercover, Part 2
Added 2022-06-17 23:44:44 +0000 UTCThis turned out much longer than I planned. 😊
Thank you to everyone who voted! And don't worry, Special Agent Peter Abaya will return!
Comments
Do is she under his mind control or no? Or are we supposed to decide for ourselves hehe.
Jessica Thence
2023-05-27 02:22:28 +0000 UTCOh my god, Stacy, can you imagine how epic that would’ve been? 🤣 Well, now you can see it here instead!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-06-21 18:40:08 +0000 UTCThat’s really sweet, Kirsten. Thank you! I’m hoping to continue this one for at least a few more “episodes.” 😊
Emory Ahlberg
2022-06-21 18:39:07 +0000 UTCThank you, Naomi! ❤️ These questions you’ve brought up are the same ones swirling through my mind as I wonder what will happen next in Peter’s journey. Also, how quickly will he adapt to his new womanhood? And once he does, what will the impact be on his mission? Indeed, Peter’s situation is only becoming more and more complex. Hopefully he won’t lose himself in the role. 😊
Emory Ahlberg
2022-06-21 18:38:17 +0000 UTCThank you so much! Yeah, I could totally see this as a TV series. Somebody call up HBO! Who needs, like, three more Game of Thrones spin-offs when you could have this? 🤣 And, God, Alyson, that one dress was sooo disappointing.
Emory Ahlberg
2022-06-21 18:34:40 +0000 UTCThank you, Ella! I continue to be sorry that you seem to often lose the polls. But I’m so happy you enjoy the ride anyway! 😁
Emory Ahlberg
2022-06-21 18:31:00 +0000 UTCOh, your exactly right, Pel. How will Peter react once he’s in a high enough position to destroy both the Navarros and the Sandovals? By that point, he’ll have wealth and power beyond his imagination. And with great power comes great… opportunities. 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2022-06-21 18:29:49 +0000 UTCMy idea is that Peter doesn’t have any memories of his time as “Maya” — at least, not yet. So, yes, Peter will need to learn how to please Diego in order for the plan to work!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-06-21 18:27:43 +0000 UTCYes, I agree that it does, Maven. I want to explore what happens to “Maya.” Thank you! 😁
Emory Ahlberg
2022-06-21 18:26:15 +0000 UTCI loved the TV series 'Narco's and I think they missed a trick not having this storyline LoL x
stacy C
2022-06-20 22:49:53 +0000 UTCReally loving this one. All your stories are so good
Kirsten Roberts
2022-06-19 13:19:16 +0000 UTCI am loving each chapter of this series so far. Here Maya is in the first chapter waking up to the shock of being transformed from Agent Peter Abaya into the woman she now is, & the chapter ends with her resolve to continue the mission as her new self. Now we're finding out she not only has already had sex with a man without her knowledge, must not only be reunited with this man, but she must fall in love with & marry him and well. How will she achieve this task? Has she already ignited the sparks of love in Diego's heart from the previous encounter she doesn't remember? Will she ignite the sparks of love in her own heart as she comes to know Diego through frequent encounters, courtship and marriage? Will she complete her mission or will her priorities change as she becomes Diego's wife? So many questions & hopefully we get many chapters to answer them. You've outdone yourself with this caption. I can't wait for what is the next of hopefully many chapters.
Winter Naomi Vera .
2022-06-18 16:11:59 +0000 UTCAgreed, plus we need compensation for the fact that in The Assignment she wore only one (1) dress, like, cmon
Alyson Greaves
2022-06-18 12:23:00 +0000 UTCTHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS IS EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPIC WOW I am kinda speechless how awesome this story is... this is a material for Hollywood movie... eee nope scratch that... for a series... 40 mins episodes how many???? IDK exact number but MANY for sure :) :) :) Would it be ok if Michelle Rodriguez played the main role? I have a weakness for her and besides she already played a forcibly feminized character in one movie :) "The Assignment" (2016)
MaggieHeels
2022-06-18 10:14:47 +0000 UTCLost the poll, but love the story! And I’m thrilled this is not the last time we see Peter!
Ella Cherry
2022-06-18 03:43:44 +0000 UTCHopefully Peter will realize the power he's been given. If he can learn to enjoy his new form, as Maya he will be in a much better position to destroy both rivals. The danger here is not the rival families but fighting the temptation of becoming corrupt herself when she takes them all under her feet.
Pelicanboss
2022-06-18 03:16:02 +0000 UTCPoor Peter? ...Either device has some sort of memory-wipe functionality - or Maya was running on autopilot when she captured Diego's interests and now it is upto Peter to seal the deal :D
punarotta
2022-06-18 01:48:09 +0000 UTCExcellent story! Maybe it even deserves more.
maven poulter
2022-06-18 01:23:52 +0000 UTC
