Homecoming - Episode 5
Added 2022-02-21 08:52:49 +0000 UTCChris has his first encounter with a "client." Things don't go quite as planned...
Episode 5 of Homecoming is here! Yay! 😁
I'm sorry this is a bit late but, well, it's 26 darn pages! I had a moment I really wanted to get to at the end of this episode, and some things I wanted to explore.
I'm sooo loving the psychological aspect of this story. It may not be as complex as Jack & Jill or Half Sisters, but the straightforwardness of Chris' circumstances makes him just as compelling to write.
I sooo can't wait to hear your thoughts. 🥰
Comments
Very interesting and different approach to this type of story. Usually the heroine is thrown into the deep end. I enjoyed the difference!
Jessica Thence
2022-09-11 14:02:49 +0000 UTCLOL! That's exactly what I was going for, Stacy. Although I don't think Chris thought it was very sweet. 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2022-03-04 20:46:50 +0000 UTCThank you so much, Pelican! That means a lot to me. 😀 Yeah, Chris's hair is not the best right now -- but he has never had long hair before! LOL. Don't worry, he'll slowly get better as time marches on. Years will pass while he's down there...
Emory Ahlberg
2022-03-04 20:45:56 +0000 UTCAwww pic 14 is like watching 2 awkward teenagers sharing their first kiss hehe x
stacy C
2022-02-25 13:46:49 +0000 UTCThank you, findesiecle! ❤️
Ella Cherry
2022-02-22 20:31:30 +0000 UTCE, the detail in the skin textures is amazing. You're a master in effective lighting and texture rendering. Regarding the story, I'm surprised Bella has not demanded hair care and styling as she has makeup. That hair needs improvement if Chris is gonna see clients.
Pelicanboss
2022-02-22 18:35:46 +0000 UTCAl might be a nice guy... but he must have had a serious case of "blue balls" when he left Chris' bedroom!!
Bowie897
2022-02-22 15:18:34 +0000 UTCHappy Birthday Ella!
findesiecle
2022-02-22 07:10:48 +0000 UTCThank Ali! ❤️ 😘
Ella Cherry
2022-02-21 21:21:33 +0000 UTCI love how much you understand your characters in all situations Emory, it's clear how awkward this is but the realisation that this is the beginning of a way to escape this awful situation dawns on her, once you see a glimmer of hope, you'll do anything to escape this torment, loved this chapter so much x
Alison St John
2022-02-21 20:51:07 +0000 UTCHappy Birthday Ella, hope you have an amazing time on your special day x
Alison St John
2022-02-21 20:48:40 +0000 UTCI’ll only say that I’m considering this chapter a birthday gift to me! 😂 I love homecoming! Thanks Emory! ❤️
Ella Cherry
2022-02-21 19:29:22 +0000 UTCI loved the man’s reaction and I think that she should have more interactions like this where is hard for her to blame the men for her situation and she grows to realize she can see men from a different perspective this way. To judge men based on their treatment of her as a woman and how some men are decent and just craving a moment of connection and how their appreciation of femaleness is “enduring” and being with those types of men make it philosophically rewarding to make them happy even if that’s make her the female in their eyes. And then suddenly one of them makes her feel something sexual and she begins to question her sexuality
Emily Morgan
2022-02-21 18:30:06 +0000 UTCAlways loved the moment they begin injecting themselves. It’s like they have accepted the situation as inevitable and how it means up until that point the changes were physically forced onto them but now it’s done by their own hands.
Emily Morgan
2022-02-21 18:21:39 +0000 UTCKeeping a diary like: Cons: I'm growing breasts, I have no control over my life, and my nipples hurt. Pros: I'm sleeping like a baby and I accidentally gave myself an orgasm when I bumped chest-first into the wall.
Alyson Greaves
2022-02-21 12:56:28 +0000 UTCSomething else (besides boobs) that poor Chris desperately needs. 🙂
Emory Ahlberg
2022-02-21 12:52:12 +0000 UTCAlso progesterone helps you get really good sleep! 😴
Alyson Greaves
2022-02-21 12:43:13 +0000 UTC🤣 To me, progesterone is like the death-knell of masculinity. It’s a so-called “pregnancy” hormone for goodness sake! 😉
Emory Ahlberg
2022-02-21 12:24:42 +0000 UTCOh my god, progesterone! Poor Chris is going to have to deal with sore nipples along with... okay, captivity, fine, that doesn't make achey nips seem all that bad.
Alyson Greaves
2022-02-21 12:00:58 +0000 UTCSublime rendering by saying and drawing, of a very complex situation. You knew how to explain without collision this state of mind which brings us closer with compassion to the reality of Chris. Thanks Emory.
France Day
2022-02-21 11:31:40 +0000 UTC
