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The Second Dawn Files - Kevin Harris

The Platinum Star members of The Second Dawn (aka you) chose Kevin for feminization!

EDIT: Sorry, accidentally forgot the text on page 3!

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LOL - I agree, Jess! Look on the bright side.

Emory Ahlberg

Just take the W and be happy!

Jessica Thence

Haha yeah there'd probably be a queue of people.....contest sounds good, what do you think it should be based on? x

stacy C

I've had a similar idea, Stacy. The only problem is I think there'd be too many "volunteers," LOL. Maybe a contest of some kind?

Emory Ahlberg

LOL! He complains about the broccoli as much as the estrogen! 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Btw Em, I have an idea for a caption.....how about choosing one of us members and creating one using the scenario that we have betrayed Second Dawn and they are out for revenge, or something like that. Think it would be fun :-) x

stacy C

Haha....."forced to eat broccoli" how evil we all are. Even though I chose Amir Kevin has come out lovely.

stacy C

They're everywhere, Ella! Hehe.

Emory Ahlberg

And maybe we will, Crystal! I enjoyed making it!

Emory Ahlberg

Does second dawn act in Brazil? Just asking…

Ella Cherry

Really want to see more of this story!

Crystal Peaches

Dinner (gathering) was mentioned also in Jill's story, so Katie could one of the other girls there...

punarotta

Is Katie going to be integrated in Jill's or the Half Sisters story? If I didn't hate the Old Xu so much I'd say he has done a good thing here. That beautie couldn't have come out of such a dude.

Pelicanboss

Wow! That was a quick fix. Thank you, Emory, you are the best. I repeat, I love where this story is going….. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Rex

Fixed! Sorry about that! Thank you, Rex!

Emory Ahlberg

Right, the captions are identical on pages 3 and 4, but, I LOVE where this story is going. I cannot wait for subsequent submissions. Great work, Emory!!!! ❤️❤️

Rex

Shit, you’re right! Thanks, Femur!

Emory Ahlberg

I think this is mis-captioned - pages 3 and 4 are the same and don't match the text file. Page 3 is what needs fixing, I believe.

Zabelle


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