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The characters in my notepad😄
The heroine, who works in the international division of a company and is married, unexpectedly runs into Mark—the colleague she's on a business trip with—in the shared sauna facility one day.

국제계열 회사의 상관인 히로인(남편 있음)이 어느날 출장을 함께가게 된 마크와 공용사우나 시설에서 마주치게된 장면😄

国際部門の会社で上司であるヒロイン(既婚)は、ある日一緒に地方出張に行くことになったマークと、宿泊施設の共用サウナで偶然出会ってしまうシーン。😄

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I love BBC!!! more!!

Polar

This, if it's too big it becomes so unrealistic that is a turn off.

Polar

more petite/smaller tits pls

ibTofu

This character expression got me thinking, I've noticed the characters I like most in your stories are the girls like Sumin in Nevertheless who are somewhat teasing and mocking towards the MC and have a playful dynamic or sometimes even a bit dominant, but importantly they are very different with the guy who comes in and steals them, like they're super lovey dovey or especially have ahegao faces during sex with the other men. It's that kind of difference in treatment between the 2 men that is really hot to me. Another example would be like Mijoo from Doubt and Hejoo from Memory. But to me, the most interesting and poignant emotion in your stories comes from the comparison and difference in treatment between the MC and the other guy by the main heroin when it's NOT directly in a sex scene. Like in Doubt when she's smiling and waving to the new guy, or wearing a new ring that matches his instead of her old one. Or in Nevertheless when she starts vaping, changes her profile picture to have one with the new guy instead of MC, and her behavior in general changing. The non-sex related and more emotional aspect of losing the girl is the part that really makes it hit hard and makes the story hard to forget. I feel that may be why I enjoy your stories so much, you make it absolutely brutal when you show these differences, the physical for sure, but even more so when you show the emotional changes and comparisons in treatment, it's painful, but in the way NTR is supposed to be I guess. I feel like I enjoy your stories the most when it has a clear focus on the pain of the girl choosing someone else over the mc emotionally, not just physically.

King Q

Would love for the husband to be with her in the sauna when they meet. Would show a clear contrast

YBAPro

Love the design she looks completely hot and cant wait to see what your gonna do with it though haha :) I have a suggestion maybe you can make a story where Mc grew up with his hot grandmother and she betrays him with Mc's bully or something :)

Sephiroth FFVII

Peak design

V901

I love the idea and the design. It has a lot of potential. Maybe she could be in her mid-40s (a few years ago I dated one, and they’re absolute lionesses). This story, instead of being as dramatic as Paradise, could be a bit lighter. Her partner wouldn’t be exactly a scumbag, and at the beginning he wouldn’t want to take advantage of her out of great respect for her, since she’s his boss or something like that. But as the chapter progresses and he starts to dominate her more and more, his dominant side would come out until he ends up treating her like his personal onahole. She would absolutely love it, and it would remind her of her younger years, when she was the most desired and coveted gyaru. Her husband could have been left with erectile dysfunction due to some accident, and his cuck side—watching his wife being used—would bring his erections back. You could even add a daughter or you could even have the Black guy’s sister taking advantage of the husband. I don’t know, I think it could be something like this.

Chemaslocas117

Thank you, your sketch/notepad posts always show some nice possibilities for future content and even as a standalone are always a good addition

divea

Ohhhh also I love Misaki's Hair style, please consider something of similar style in future works I think it looks great :)

hailey

Your spoiling us so much!!! thank you so much lali once again, beautiful character

hailey


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