XaiJu
ratatatat74
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5$) Bad end EP2

기다려 주셔서 감사합니다

부디 마음에 드셨으면 좋겠습니다

본 시리즈는 3부작 정도로 계획하고 있습니다

그거보다 더 회차가 늘어날수도 있고, 아직까지 뭐라 확답 드리긴 어렵습니다만

하지만 여러분들이 좋아해주신다면 만족합니다

22일날 8달러로 찾아뵙겠습니다

다시한번 이해해주신 모든 분들께 감사드립니다

Thank you for waiting

I hope you like it

I'm planning to do a three-part series

There might be more episodes than that. It's hard to tell you for sure

But if you like it, I'm satisfied

I'll see you on the 22nd for $8

Please wait a little longer for the translation.

Once again, thank you to everyone who understood

お待ちいただきありがとうございます

どうか気に入っていただけたら嬉しいです

本シリーズは3部作くらいで計画していますが

それよりもっと回数が増えるかもしれないし、 今のところ何ともはっきりお答えできません

でも皆さんが好きになってくれたら満足です

22日に8ドルでお伺いします

翻訳本はどうかもう少しお待ちください。

改めて、ご理解いただいた全ての方々に感謝いたします

5$) Bad end EP2 5$) Bad end EP2

Comments

Great work

Muqabe

When is this being translated?

Jakkky

Likhan is really cute, I kind of feel bad for him

deloy Drole

But scrap, cucking is why we're here.

Steve Jobs' aborted fetus

amazing! cant wait to see both girls broken~

Q

Well this just sucks. Honestly it’s a repeat of that wife NTR you did, just with BEP. Would’ve made for an engaging story if Rei stayed loyal but nah. Talk about creatively bankrupt. By that I mean once you’ve read one of Rat’s doujins, you’ve seen every single one of her works. This story for example. It’s not the wife NTR story. It’s just the Ice troll warrior ending. Replace him with Philip who’s totally original and not just “Lihan but make him the stereotypical NTR antagonist this time.” “But Scrap, aren’t you being a bit harsh?” No actually. Giving Rat ideas she won’t follow isn’t cutting it, from the previous comments. Her art’s nice. She can do some solid world building, and has some good character design (Brugo, the orc is my favorite by far) But that’s it. Her stories are either carried by fanfics on AO3 written by haters, or AI chatbots. The stories just fall flat in creativity because it’s just “the weak Asian boy gets cucked by the faceless alpha Eurocentric or Afrocentric Chad” over and over again. There’s little variety. I can only name like two stories that don’t involve some form of cucking, SA (mainly as a shock factor), or the mix. I don’t even need to read the third part to know where the rest of this story goes. Rei gets addicted to having sex with Philip and then humiliates Lihan with Ashe. Kick him out and that’s the end. Boom, that’s going to be part 3 unless Rat reads this and decides to backpedal from it or give up on this story. If not. It’s so painfully predictable that you shouldn’t waste your time with this. There’s yaoi manwha with bad art styles (on purpose or not) that has entertained and got me more engaged into the story compared to your works.

Scrap


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