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Happy Boxing Day (..whatever that is)! I hope your winter has been warm and filled with the joy of loved ones (even if that loved one is just yourself!!)

I'm really excited to post this page, because it's my favorite page I've done so far! If you need a quick refresher on which sister is which (although ultimately, I hope, each sisters' personality will come through enough on the page that folks won't need to keep track of who's who):

I also hope that the subtle dialogue here and on page 14 starts to set the seeds in everyone's mind that there's something going on with the timeline of these flashbacks... I'm too excited to keep it all to myself, though, so for you lovely patrons, allow me to spill the beans!!

Keeping Time is told in two timelines -- one that moves forward in time (the Now), and one that moves chronologically backwards (the Then). The further the story progresses, the further back in the past we'll also go.

I'm so excited that this setup is finally becoming clear -- and hopefully, now the reason I was extremely amped about the title "Keeping Time" is also clear, hahaha!

If I don't see you before the New Year, let me thank you all again for an incredible 2023. Every single one of you reading this has helped to make my dream of this comic a reality.

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Comments

🥹 I'm so glad you noticed and liked that!!! I've been trying to make this family home look well-lived in! And YES, I had to force myself to wait until after Christmas to post this so it could be thematically on time 🤣

Kody Okamoto

What a great timing for the action to also take place during the Holidays season! I also love the details like the kids’ heights on the wall!

Amélie


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