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Monsters and Maidens (001 to 007)

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This is it, the final version of Rick story. 

3rd PoV and it will have multiple protagonists, properly this time. It will allow us to explore more of the setting and the characters. And I'm tackling some of the pacing/plot issues that the first had.

I am using everything I've been learning these past few months to improve on characters and story, so expect some minor changes in characters but bigger ones in the story.

Starting on September 1st, I will start posting this series over at: RoyalRoad, Scribblehub, QuestionableQuesting, Tapas, Inkitt, and Tapread (I will put up the links then, since they'd lead nowhere right now).

The pace will be 1 chapter a day (roughly 1K to 1.5K words each), with the posts here being weekly (so 7 chapters at a time). Same principles as before, the higher the tier the further ahead you'll be able to read.

So hope you enjoy!


Chapters 008-014 Teaser:

“We were nothing to her, one casual swipe from her was enough.” Anger and fear flared across the young man’s face, his expression becoming grim. There was an attempt to glare at the feline, but he did not dare to, certainly not wanting to risk starting anything.
The young teacher could only nod. He took a long pause to calm his emotions and head back to where he’d been sleeping and sought his backpack. He noticed the feline’s eyes were on him as he moved, though she appeared uninterested for the time being, continuing on her self-cleaning while Rick put the pouch with chocolates into the bag and pulled out a bottle of water. He needed a long gulp or four to clean his throat of the smell and took the chance to think things through more carefully.
He needed a plan.

Comments

"Big story changes" huh I hope it's not to different I really liked where the story was going


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