I was right-this page is gorgeous! I really adore the flowers-they are so lovely! Also love the expression Jintu has-it looks really thoughtful. I was surprised Tashti wearing grey since she wore blue in the old draft, but then I remembered that old piece of world building about her home country and the prince wearing grey and then it made sense. Is she required to wear grey to show she's from Gahmia or just partial to her country's colors?
Suzubelle-chan
2019-12-12 20:56:16 +0000 UTC
Well I would have missed it completely if I hadn't seen this comment! Thanks for pointing it out!
Suzubelle-chan
2019-12-12 20:47:10 +0000 UTC
Oh my goodness, I almost missed the snake hiding in the flowers. Nice touch!
2019-12-10 14:14:13 +0000 UTC
Well look at this awesome VIP over here catching my sleep-deprived mistakes! (I also forgot to color the snake earlier and only caught it right as I was about to post.) Thank you for pointing it out!
Allison Shaw
2019-12-09 20:12:24 +0000 UTC
Beautiful
(something to fix before going live, the top, left most flower is missing the yellow in the middle. Don't know if you're aware of it yet or not but thought i'd let you know just in case)
Irishxlily
2019-12-09 19:57:06 +0000 UTC
Tashti is the guest house manager, so she handles all VIP guests of the palace!
Allison Shaw
2019-12-09 19:40:32 +0000 UTC
Nicely done! Um, I'm new to your story, I take it the woman with the tray is the servant assigned to Kaz? I remember seeing a scene where K is woken up and she terrified the servant.