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Added 2021-03-16 14:07:47 +0000 UTCThe dialogue I wrote has a very serious problem: I often go to other places while talking about the topic.
And I often write very long, and it’s not nutritious
Today I wrote a whole day of dialogue for this, about why Dr. K is so far from the original version.
This paragraph of dialogue is really very long, very long, this paragraph of dialogue explains a lot of foreshadowing, but also left a lot of foreshadowing
I will translate it right away, and it will be published in about two days.
我写的对白有一个很严重的问题：经常说着说着话题就跑到别的地方去了
而且我时常写的很长，又没什么营养
今天为此写了一整天的对白，是关于K博士为何与原版差距甚大的
这一段对白真的很长，很长，这段对白解释了很多伏笔，也留下了很多伏笔
之后我会马上去翻译的，大概两天后就能发布
Comments
每次写对话、些tf过场都要死很多脑细胞
Snow Dragon
2021-03-22 01:13:52 +0000 UTCI re-written this conversation after listening to your suggestions before, and now they are different
Snow Dragon
2021-03-22 01:13:33 +0000 UTCthank you
Snow Dragon
2021-03-22 01:13:03 +0000 UTCBut the amount of information here has a sudden turnaround
Snow Dragon
2021-03-22 01:12:54 +0000 UTCI prefer to draw or make a map
Snow Dragon
2021-03-22 01:12:32 +0000 UTC辛苦了大大~
空幻
2021-03-16 17:20:05 +0000 UTCThe problem you mention is common in people who are writing or talking about things they are excited about or interested in. One of the best ways to help is to plan ahead and write an outline of what each character will talk about, and try to stick to that outline. If you find yourself still writing too much dialogue at one time, use different reactions from other characters and/or events and actions to break up the dialogue. It helps keep the reader interested and forces you to consider places where you could be more concise with your writing.
Shiny Umbreon
2021-03-16 14:24:42 +0000 UTCNo matter how long the texts are. I will read everything carefully. I love every single part of the game. UwU
2021-03-16 14:22:26 +0000 UTCThat looks like a lot. But, I always do enjoy learning more about the characters.
HunterX
2021-03-16 14:18:29 +0000 UTCWow, that’s a lot of text, thank you for your work
Weeb
2021-03-16 14:11:15 +0000 UTC
