XaiJu
Adamo Amet
Adamo Amet

patreon


Chapter no.84 The Dragon, The Giant and The Angel

Seigmeyer sat at the ponticulus of Sen's Fortre

Chapter no.84 The Dragon, The Giant and The Angel

Comments

this was great but I really hope it will be a while before anything mentioned in that prophecy becomes relevant. that should be end game stuff. naruto is still 12. its barely been a couple months in story since this all started. Id hate for this story to end with naruto still barely growing hair on chest.

Javen

Hm, this chapter was great and def gives a lot to think about. My initial guess is the giant is sif who was saved by minato in this timeline and the angel is Priscilla. Super excited to see where things are going

zzdog

Fair enough. Havel is an incredibly interesting character in Dark Souls—both in-game and in terms of lore. In the games, his followers appear across the series, and his armor set is still considered one of the best. Then there’s all the fascinating lore surrounding him: the rumored plot against the gods, his relationship with Seath, the possible connection to Rhea as his daughter, and all the ties to characters like Pharis, Velka, and Arstor. Honestly, I could’ve done a lot more with Havel. I actually sat down and thought about making him a recurring supporting character—but he kind of breaks the story. Havel is too strong. The version of him that fought Everlasting Dragon Naruto was Havel fresh out of a decade-long prison, without rest, and he still nearly pulled it off. That’s how powerful he is. Multiple gods—Velka included—believed he could actually kill the other gods. He’s also too knowledgeable. If Havel were around as a mentor figure, he’d probably take Naruto straight to Ash Lake and have him trained by the Everlasting Dragon on day one. That kind of support would undercut the core of Naruto’s journey in Naruto: The Chosen Undead. Could I have done more with his character? Absolutely. Would it have changed the path I’ve planned for the story? Yes. So I hope this explains why I had to kill Havel off.

Muhammad Hasnain

So first of all great chapter, and I'm puting my money on giant being the giant blacksmith in Alor Londo and angel being Priscilla

Yvros

I really think you killed havel to early you could've at least let him talk to naruto and teach the i flame and then give the darksign to Oscar or you could've let him fight seath with naruto and then die i really liked his character so I feel it was wasted to kill him this early

War_craft

Amazing chapter. So much going on and I can’t wait for more. I like the extra lore you created and added in. A part of me thinks Minato is the one that left Naruto the darkhold but I’m probably wrong. It is an interesting idea to have Minato go to Lordran and would definitely be some development. Originally I thought the Giant and the Angel would be Sakura and Sasuke respectively, but you said they haven’t been introduced yet so that might be wrong. I’m excited for Oscar to get an upgrade and am curious on how Naruto is. Can’t wait for the next

Natural

Great chapter, love the theory craft and coolest fight yet

Artur Bernardo

First, the chapters was incredible and well worth the wait 10/10 peak. Secondly, I believe Oscar should be around the level of an average chunin in his physical stats with much higher AP due to his soul magic chakra gun. Lastly, I'm curious if Narutos will keep any of his strength boosts from being a dragon. Hopefully he does, it'd be really cool if he had access to some of his dragon abilities in base form, like telekinesis or his regeneration factor being boosted due to having a dragon core from the drake sword sacrifice.

Aiden Steinman


More Creators