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Added 2025-02-19 19:08:40 +0000 UTCYOOOOOUUUUUUU
YOUR SEX IS ON FIYAAAH
Comments
scrumpt. 😠i'm only using this from now on
blyatbrat
2025-02-23 03:48:50 +0000 UTCOnly saw the updated version. Perfect.
Gothic Crow
2025-02-22 04:02:42 +0000 UTC"Hey baby, does the carpet match the drapes?" "I am a fan of arson, so SOMETIMES!"
Daniel Gore
2025-02-20 19:40:38 +0000 UTCSeen the before and after... I think a bit of subtle smoldering on #4 would do wonders for clarity. And a bit of yellow on #5. But that's just IMO, it does look like fire.
Lane Anderson
2025-02-19 23:51:19 +0000 UTCReading the description helped me get the joke. 😆 But, real talk, did Viv's leg get burned by the freaky-vampire-crotch-fire? Because a burn to the back of the knee sounds hella inconvenient....
Mari
2025-02-19 22:57:37 +0000 UTCTHE SCREAM I SCRUMPT
albsmalbs
2025-02-19 22:17:56 +0000 UTCLooks clearer to me now! 🔥
Lynnie Beep
2025-02-19 22:06:16 +0000 UTCNew meaning to fire crotch
the.adhd.tiger
2025-02-19 21:59:39 +0000 UTCWell I feel honored
Jesuwig
2025-02-19 21:40:11 +0000 UTCDefinitely fire! Gives new meaning to the term hot pants.
Alex Lilly
2025-02-19 21:38:38 +0000 UTCManaged to get it revised pretty quickly! Should look a lot better now.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 21:28:14 +0000 UTCHey Alex! Should look a lot better now.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 20:55:20 +0000 UTCFixed!
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 20:55:01 +0000 UTCYou and Neil are the patrons of the month. I shall place your usernames in a cute little frame and hang it in my studio.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 20:54:46 +0000 UTCYay I helped! Boo I caused a panic
Jesuwig
2025-02-19 20:53:59 +0000 UTCOh you absolutely did, and it ended up saving the comic before it went public hahaha
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 20:52:42 +0000 UTCI appreciate the fix, wasn’t trying to cause a panic 😅
Jesuwig
2025-02-19 20:51:49 +0000 UTCOkay, it should look like an actual fire now, haha.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 20:49:27 +0000 UTCShould be a loooot better now, just updated the panel. Not perfect, but will have to do haha.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 20:46:12 +0000 UTCThe 3rd Panel is me when my gf is cooking in undies and i am Just Standing there resisting the urge xD (the kitchen ist super small and i May Not Help :c)
Birnen Bruder
2025-02-19 20:39:28 +0000 UTCOkay, finally got that final panel fixed! It should be swapped by the time the rest of y'all view this comic. :D
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 20:30:53 +0000 UTCHa! Can you imagine.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 20:21:42 +0000 UTCYou could always just add a fun arrow that says "This is fire" lol
Crackerjam
2025-02-19 20:07:56 +0000 UTCAt first I thought Ellie had snapped Viv's leg and it was blood, then I thought it was a centipede burst. I had to read the title to get it. I think if there was some yellow and orange it would read more fire and less bloody 😅
Lynnie Beep
2025-02-19 19:57:15 +0000 UTCGot a ton of suggestions here in the comments and in the chat, and working up to figuring out how to revise that without spending another 2 hours on the panel haha.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:56:52 +0000 UTCA+ comic but yeah, like other people I feel like that last panel needs some clarification. Maybe just a change in how the fire looks?
Crackerjam
2025-02-19 19:52:19 +0000 UTCI think if the flames were a little less blood red and more golden/orange, the joke would land immediately.
Ondi Gottesman
2025-02-19 19:45:26 +0000 UTCOkay, good to know, that's about what the patrons in the chat are saying. I am going to considering moving that around before a public drop. Thanks!
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:44:29 +0000 UTCOk I asked for a second opinion with zero context and I guess cause the fire overlaps with Viv's hamstring, it does look a bit like her hamstring spontaneously combusted/exploded. But once I said no, their next guess was 'centiboner', lol.
Alex Lilly
2025-02-19 19:43:43 +0000 UTCI couldn't quite tell if that was blood, or Ellie suddenly unable to control a centipede burst/transition, or fire, but when I read the title I got it!
Lulu
2025-02-19 19:39:53 +0000 UTCalso, is this how they coined the term "hot pants" lol
blyatbrat
2025-02-19 19:39:48 +0000 UTCNo, you're fine! I always encourage that. Getting a lot of insight over on the chat as well. I'm unable to revise it at this time, but they can't always be perfect, haha.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:36:45 +0000 UTCi got it immediately once i realised it was fire and not blood ðŸ˜
blyatbrat
2025-02-19 19:36:33 +0000 UTCEveryone is very divided in the chat on the last panel. Some are saying it clicked right away even without the title ref and some it did not land, haha. Still deciding if it'll go up publicly.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:32:18 +0000 UTCI guess I'm the only one that read the caption and immediately understood what was happening? Lol. She was never gonna make it to the other leg.
Alex Lilly
2025-02-19 19:27:13 +0000 UTCSorry, that was unsolicited advice. My bad!
Daniel Gore
2025-02-19 19:21:27 +0000 UTCChrist, fuck, haha. I am about to delete this.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:17:36 +0000 UTCOh no, I didn't get the punchline until I read your caption. Then I laughed 🤣
Alex Z
2025-02-19 19:17:16 +0000 UTCBetter than a fart lit on fire
Grond112358
2025-02-19 19:16:55 +0000 UTCI placed it directly in front of her crotch and had hoped that would work. The dialog was also meant to imply she was already in a state before the last panel. Win some, lose some!
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:16:47 +0000 UTCI think if you scooted Eli back a little further away it would make it more clear where the fire is coming from? Or if you had a single frame of smoke leaking from her pants before the fire explodes? Or if the fire had black smoke rather than red with red? It kinda looks like blood, on less that is what you were going for lol
Daniel Gore
2025-02-19 19:15:52 +0000 UTCAlso, there will never be a fart joke in my comics. Not really my style, haha.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:15:46 +0000 UTCThis isn't good. I had thought the second panel made it very clear what was happening to her, lol.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:15:15 +0000 UTCDefinitely my first thought
Shawn
2025-02-19 19:14:25 +0000 UTCDid her damndest
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:13:49 +0000 UTCThis comic is not translating right at all hahaha. Hell.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:12:45 +0000 UTCAre y'all being funny or did I completely fuck up this comic haha
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:12:13 +0000 UTCPoor thing she tried lol
Eros Makepeace
2025-02-19 19:11:55 +0000 UTCis this the fire crotch I've heard about?
Corkers
2025-02-19 19:11:47 +0000 UTCLol, what lmao. No that is not a fart.
Caroline Catlett Gates
2025-02-19 19:11:35 +0000 UTCI definitely thought she just broke her leg and blood was shooting out at first. The "your sex is on fire" made what was actually happening click haha
Daniel Gore
2025-02-19 19:11:25 +0000 UTC"You, uh... You need an ointment for that?"
Shane Openo
2025-02-19 19:11:10 +0000 UTCIs that a fart? Or worse? Or… better?
Jesuwig
2025-02-19 19:10:59 +0000 UTC
