Shadowlark Page 4
Added 2018-05-09 04:22:35 +0000 UTCEarly post of this week's page
Need to start on the roughs for the next batch of pages this week between commissions and other projects. But overall happy with the way this turned out.
My main concern is always readability in Shadowlark. I really hate having to rely on exposition to get across ideas - and prefer to convey events visually or with context: limiting dialogue to what feels natural for the scene.
Comments
"Show, don't tell" is good storytelling, my dude. This is a great way to introduce the concept of Eve's Ruby Vault -- it's obvious that it's the same dude's face in panels 1, 3, and 4.
Devilpants
2018-05-10 04:34:17 +0000 UTC
