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School Reunion, part 3 - Sketches

Originally, I had Andrew in the centre of the frame, with Tommy looking 'past' him to the auction house bully, but I became concerned it looked too much like Tommy was getting angry with Andrew, so for the sake of clarity I switched their positions. Though I think in terms of layout, the original composition was stronger. 

School Reunion, part 3 - Sketches School Reunion, part 3 - Sketches School Reunion, part 3 - Sketches School Reunion, part 3 - Sketches

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I love these. I agree that the original version was probably a slightly stronger composition, but I can see exactly what you mean - the version you went with eliminates any doubt as to whom Tommy is directing his ire. And oh, that beautiful belly on Andrew...yum! xxx

Carl Quaif


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