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My Hero Automata 130 & 131

First of all...thanks to The Foreign Traveler, we have a piece of art for Izumi :-). They commissioned a piece for her from Lionheart Studios here on Patreon. It's a pretty solid showing of her and her original costume! If the art's to your taste, go check out more of Lionheart's stuff (God knows starving artists need attention!).

Now, with that special treat taken care of, on to today's update! As usual, we've got a couple of new chapters for My Hero Automata for the 1st! A bit over 5,000 words, they keep creeping us forward on development of the new industry in space, among other bits and pieces!

As always, the new chapters are attached here in various formats. While you can find the Master Files containing the entire story in the Pinned Post. Enjoy!

My Hero Automata 130 & 131

Comments

Yep. I didn't use the page numbers, so this is completely fine and likely easier on you :-). The edits from this and the other MHA set have been made to the master file I'm about to upload. Thanks, as always!

Novus Peregrine

Let's do this! Edit 1: …sub-area of expertise. “Do” to the… …sub-area of expertise. “Due” to the… Edit 2: …,and the pilots have “been” be pretty small… …,and the pilots have “to” be pretty small… Edit 3: …for the Shieldmaidens had kept him “full” occupied… …for the Shieldmaidens had kept him “fully” occupied… I believe you mentioned you don't use the Chapters and Pages I leave in my edits, you just use your Search feature. If I'm remembering that right, figured I'd change up how I post this to you.

The Foreign Traveler

Nice chapter! Saw just a couple grammar/spelling mistakes. In 130 you used 'too' instead of 'to' and in 131 there's possibly an extraneous had or 'd in one of the sentences where Inteli was doing her mental monologue about meeting Izumi.

Donan The Barbarian


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