New Harry Potter Fanfic
Added 2020-11-19 23:00:26 +0000 UTCI know what you're thinking. Not only have I not finished The Last Prayer, but I'm also stuck on From Ruin. Why would I start another fic? The answer to that is the entire outline to this new HP ff is already done.
It's not a simple outline either. My outlines generally have dialogue and a bit of action written and this outline totaled out to 30 chapters and 86 thousand words. Each chapter only needs a few re-reads to polish up the flow of it. So unlike The Last Prayer and From Ruin, this story is pretty much done and easy to work on around my other fics.
Also, Kathryn518 helped me figure this story out so it makes this story extra special to me since her story motivated me to write in the first place.
For the details... It's called Death's Door. The original title was Death Wish but after catching COVID and staying in the hospital, I changed it. I've always wanted to write a Master of Death fic but I never really found many that I loved so I wrote one with a time travel twist. Because I'm a perv, it'll be a Harry/multi and have lemons in it but not with all the girls. There's a reason for this. You'll see when you read. It'll also have violence and cursing.
Lastly, if you guys notice anything that might improve it or a mistake I made, please let me know. I'll probably post this once I finish getting 5 chapters ready to post.
Enjoy the read, than you for your support, and please stay safe!
--Grae
Comments
Mmmnnn. Interesting. Thank you. Ill see how that changes the flow.
Grae Foxx
2020-11-20 09:13:56 +0000 UTCI don't think I have, but it's a bit silly to have two chapters in the same chapter. A prologue that's significantly shorter than the average chapter isn't strange at all, however. *Spoilers from here* . . . ‘I met death… and did not die…’ Is a fantastic point to end the prologue, but it's a full third of the doc. Personally, I'd do the split there, after what I had previously called the "intermission"
RHar
2020-11-20 08:44:50 +0000 UTCHmm, do you mean the break between Harry making his deal with death and then returning to the past? Cuz i think it does feel like a split chapter but theres so much to go through, it might not matter. Have you read some fics that have the prelude and aftermath in the same chapter? Cuz i could write the word prelude at the top of the beginning then chap 1 when he's back.
Grae Foxx
2020-11-20 08:36:05 +0000 UTCA really interesting read. I have to say, it feels like prologue, intermission, then first chapter. Maybe divvy it up like that when you eventually post it? I know you like posting longer chapters, but this totally feels like The Curse of Life should be a prologue.
RHar
2020-11-20 08:29:31 +0000 UTCI'll see what i can do.
Grae Foxx
2020-11-19 23:26:55 +0000 UTCThanks for the new story. Will leave a comment once I have I chance to read it.
Zerak
2020-11-19 23:23:11 +0000 UTCCool man I’m happy to read what u put out. Side note, could u post the chapter as a post on patreon? Instead of the attachment style bc it’s impossible for me to read it like that. If it’s not doable all good I’ll wait till it’s up on ff.net
Zachary Smith
2020-11-19 23:05:28 +0000 UTC
