Uzumaki Tayuya?
Added 2019-09-22 03:45:24 +0000 UTCThis pole will last up until I write her in the story, but should I make Tayuya(I assume you're all Naruto fans) an Uzumaki? I want more Uzumaki's in his clan and she has red hair, so, I'm curious to know your accumulated feeling to this.
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That sounds interesting.
Grae Foxx
2019-10-21 04:58:42 +0000 UTCThere was a story I read a long while ago that had her as a member of a branch family. I think her family were raised as the bodyguards of the main branch or something. At the very least it'd be an interesting dynamic.
Lord Vortrex
2019-10-21 00:42:27 +0000 UTCI dont mind jumping into filler or even movies if its just to fill out the Uzumaki Clan. I just looked into Honoka(cuz i do not remember her) and she totally fits. As for Tayuya, I feel she could be interesting. She definitely has a personality, I just don't know how she fits yet. I lile to let things simmer in my mind before I eventually find something I like. We'll see. Thanks for the comment 😊
Grae Foxx
2019-10-15 17:10:09 +0000 UTCI feel like Tayuya is an awesome addition to the Uzumaki clan, but also that she should probably be the last addition if you're not going to delve into filler arcs. Looking at you Honoka(even though it wasn't specifically stated she was an Uzumaki, it's safe to say she is one). Tayuya studying the arc of Fuinjutsu would definitely be an interesting thing to read, if you go that route.
Midnight
2019-10-15 14:39:12 +0000 UTCSorry for the mess at the end, I made a copy and paste with Google traslator.
GreedOnGreed
2019-10-04 14:21:39 +0000 UTCah! Ok, I thought it had happened but you had skipped the scene. Well there must be a reason why Amaru was chosen instead of someone else to contain Bijuu? Does it not seem strange to you that Sora has done less damage than Naruto using the chakra cloak to a level similar to that against Oro-chich — mamaru? He does not have the same capacity for regeneration and a clearly inferior seal. Could Karui have been kidnapped as a child or be the breeding product like the one Kumo wanted to do with Hinata? Was Kushina's kidnapping attempt due to being an Uzumaki or because they knew he was a Jinchuriki? You could add some members inspired by other Manga, such as: Mikoto Suoh, Soma Yukihira, Rias Gremory, Shana, Yugju Jubei, Yoko Litner, Rider Fate / 0, Karma Akabani, Klaus Von Reiherz, Junichiro Kagami, Yuuki Tenpouin, Kurisu Makise, Shanks the red, Erza Scarlett and Shirou Emiya. I personally am not a fan of including Tenten and Samui, however the choice is yours. So as Naruto got the penis shape from Kurama, does Yugito have periods when he ends up in heat? Who knows what the others got from their Bijuu? Did Hagoromo randomly pick up their animal shapes that they found around? The Uzumaki descend from him since Nagato has the Rinnegan. Some of the descendants of Hamura belonging to the Otsutsuki clan are known to have sealed their Byakugan differently from the Yuugas. The Kaguyas who have the name in honor of their mother from which branch they derive? is selected
GreedOnGreed
2019-10-04 14:06:21 +0000 UTCThinking about the Uzumaki clan, i know that i dont want it to just be two members. So, thats why i was considering other red-haired people. Maybe Roshi. I never thought of him. Amaru is from land of fire but she could work. I dont know. Its going to take more thought. Also Tsunami never had sex with Naruto in the story, so shes not pregnant. That scene was cut out from the story. Thanks again for reading and commenting. Have a great one, --Grae
Grae Foxx
2019-10-03 22:59:15 +0000 UTCCould Mei have changed her surname for her safety, having only one Uzumaki parent or just being originally from Uzu? Fuka, the one that absorbed the chakra through kisses could be another? Roshi is said to have left his village to control the power of Son Goku but if it was for the destruction of his clan? Amaru the carrier of the Zero Code I'm not sure what color hair was? Strange that there is no other Uzumaki in Conoa. Perhaps there could be another member of his clan with no red hair? Sooner or later will he decide to visit the ruins of Uzu? Perhaps on the island there could be some survivors? I hope Tsunami didn't get pregnant, it would cause too much trouble and then she already realized that the first time she was lucky to be in the safe period.
GreedOnGreed
2019-10-03 22:45:00 +0000 UTCYeah. There arent really many to draw from. It still amazes me that the show is called Naruto, who's an Uzumaki with a cool clan, and we know more about the Uchihas than the MC's clan. I gotta fix that.
Grae Foxx
2019-10-03 15:02:45 +0000 UTCThere are actually a grand total of nine Uzumaki introduced through out the series, with a 10th being utterly unknown except for her fate and progeny. Fuso Uzumaki (Not entirely confirmed, but she did have the red hair out of the parents). Mother of Nagato killed by Konoha nin. Mito Uzumaki Kushina Uzumaki Karin Uzumaki + Un-named mother who got sucked to death in Kusa Naruto (duh) Honoka (Killed trying to create the ultimate summon, could use chains). Nagato obviously, Ashina (Clan leader when Senju rediscovered their cousins) I think that's all the ones named. You do have Boruto and Himawari, and lest we forget Tsunade is a quarter Uzumaki. Drawing a blank otherwise.
Stephen Tracy
2019-10-03 07:34:28 +0000 UTCThat's some of the fun of reading, I think. How is the author going to tackle what seems inevitable? Tayuya is too far away at the moment to truly think about, however, I'm not sure she will be in the harem. But I definitely want to expand the Uzumaki Clan. So far, we only know of three of them; slim pickings. I think Tayuya can have an interesting back story though. Hahaha, more on Kurenai in the next update, which should be coming out tomorrow or the day after. Tenten took some time to figure out. The thing I try to achieve with every girl is a need from Naruto. The need starts as an external thing which eventually morphs into an internal thing. Tenten didn't really need anything from him. She wanted the sword, sure, but not to the level of need that Ino wanted money, Kurenai wanted to help Hinata, Sakura wanted control back. All that said, I did figure something with Tenten, but you're right, I want MABUI! Luckily not much is known about her but I love her design and her personality so that's more than enough for me to come up with something.
Grae Foxx
2019-09-30 14:22:59 +0000 UTCNot sure how you'd incorporate her into the story, if she would be a detriment or something to spruce up everything and make it better. I'm not on board with expanding the harem as it were; I'm not even sure how it'll still go that route if Ino makes a play and actually tells him she wants him. I can feel some angst coming in that regard; Kurenai is falling, but she's either not remembering or hasn't quite made the step that their relationship is actually turning into more than Sensei-Student. The severe way she told him it wasn't romantic and never would be romantic likely isn't something Naruto has forgotten, but does Kurenai remember that severe line in the sand she insisted on way back when? How you'll include the likes of Tenten is also up in the air, nevermind everyone else listed. I'm personally looking forward to Mabui, that woman never really gets much show time. Given her unique jutsu I wouldn't be surprised if she's rarely, if ever, let out of Kumogakure as things stand. Not sure if it's a bloodline, but it wouldn't surprise me if it was.
Stephen Tracy
2019-09-30 08:09:21 +0000 UTCSounds like a good idea. I can't think of any other redheads in Naruto apart from Choji's dad, Kushina and Nagato. I remember seeing a fanfic where Yakumo Kurama is an Uzumaki. Apart from turning random and forgotten characters into Uzumaki's, there are always OC's. Tsunade is descended from Mito and as far as I know doesn't actively go by Senju but that might be too much. Then again she might be a good (grand)motherly figure for him then again she doesn't need to bear the name to play that role. By no means assume that I'm telling you to do this. Have a good day.
Tyler_Not_The_Creator²
2019-09-26 07:33:57 +0000 UTCIt would also open up another way to mess with Orochimaru's plans. Like getting Sasuke out of the village, disrupting the barrier in the thirds fight, shes probably the gateway to some of the more outthere lemmons to with her vulgar mind/upbringing. sorry if its like im leading I don't want to take your creative freedom by suggesting too much.
Kingsfun
2019-09-22 18:58:15 +0000 UTCHmm, that's a good point. I was thinking there's probably a story behind her character. Would be interesting to explore.
Grae Foxx
2019-09-22 04:54:09 +0000 UTCI’m good with anyone getting a second chance after dealing with Orochimaru!
Kingsfun
2019-09-22 03:46:49 +0000 UTC
