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I made a version with some comic-themed details, but wasn't sure if they made the drawing better or worse. Do you guys find that they're distracting / clutter the image, or should I experiment with things like that more often?

I'm also thinking about doing a few more drawings for this scene, but haven't fully decided. This drawing will probably be one of the panels for a comic page, if that does happen.

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the comic version looked too crowded/busy for me, I like this version best, though each person has their own preference

Nerd_Power

I really liked the comic version. I wouldn't mind seeing more.

SexyMCbacon

Two people i cant wait to see you draw is the new goodwitch and fiona the sheep fanus

Elite cobra

I don’t mind sounds but speech bubbles clutter these images too much.

So Rexy

More Ramming Ruby, Banging Blake, Wreaking Weiss, Yanging Yang, Nailing Nora, Pounding Pyrrha, and Nutting In Neo.

MasterRose88

More Ruby ramming pls

I would love to see the rest of this comic with a Grimm Ramming Ruby.

MasterRose88

I like it I just wished you did more risque angles. I love pyrrah but almost everytime she is wearing her full corset. I think if you did more of these comic panels you might want to try a 2 to 3 page thing. Maybe a bit more vaginal detail inner and outer labia making the area looked stretched not just bigger.

Fortunekuger

Yeah I really like that comic detail you gave it. Gives it more life.

Specter442

I enjoy your work regardless, but I typically prefer the onomatopoeia and other Comic-like details in a series rather than one offs.

ThatAnonGai

Do as you like I just like looking at Ruby getting fucked in the picture

Masan caldwell

Yeah makes it look hotter somehow

Index_22

I actually like the comic effect looks great nothing wrong wirh experimenting a bit and i think a comic panel would look great

Index_22

I'm a fan of the added onomatopoeia. Always appreciate your ability to depict a hand's grasp rather than it just looking like it's resting in place!

pinormous

I'd love to see you make a full on comic of this 😈😈

Taylored Printers

Love it, needs more

JamesSDO

There isn't much of a change between the two anyways so I think it looks good, not cluttered at all. Personally I prefer without the comic details but that's just me :P

Cold401

Looks good


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