Hello again, my $5 patrons! Today I bring you the second half of what turned into a real monster of a story - 36,507 words between the two of them! This half gets right into the smuttier stuff and builds it into a big oblivious climax!
Let's see the synopsis again! -
Sarah Miller has stumbled across a webpage that dictates and controls reality. What's the first thing she does with it? Give her ex boyfriend giant tits, of course! Now the two of them are out to have some fun while making the world a better place - but who is making all these perverted changes that they can't account for? And what happens when their whole world gets pulled out from under them?
Remember when I said I had a headstart on this second part? Ha! This one got completely out of hand and ended up needing as much extra work as I normally put into an update and more!
Frankly a lot of the trouble was making this one fit tonally with the late-stage edits I'd made to the first one, and the result was a lot of banging my head trying to reshape the thing. In the end it took a lot of extra conversations and characterization to even get it close, but the more romantic edge it gives was definitely worth it.
The result though, even with eight pages of cut content, is still a total beast. Heck its larger than some of the larger pieces had been, though its not quite as polished as those tend to be, haha.
This time in three weeks you can expect a bit of a pallet cleanser with Frat Bros With a Swap Device, a story where a pair of bros cause some reality-bending swappy chaos on their surroundings and most definitely on themselves!
Now that it's all come together, please let me know what you think! Either here or the discord, I absolutely love hearing from you.
Oh, and a double shout out to Coth, who not only helped steer the boat through so many choppy waters on this one, but also did this amazing cover! Thank you as well to my fiancé for still putting up with the late nights and busy weekends, and to all of you, for all of your support.
Enjoy!