We Got Another Year 4 - Page 23+ Previews
Added 2025-08-01 05:59:25 +0000 UTCHey there, everyone, I finished all the pages for this month, except for page 23.
While I like how it turned out, especially with all the dialogue, I'm still pondering if it doesn't feels a bit too "cramped". I think it works, but I would still like y'alls opinions about it.
Along with the script for the next few pages too. I would like to know what y'alls thoughts on it are too. I feel like the ending gets a bit wordy and weird in the flow, but it's a weird scene to write out anyways.
If you have any opinions for the dialogue and narrative for the next few pages, as well for the layout of page 23, let me know before I finalize them. Your opinions will help me shape the finale of this chapter before we go into the next and final chapter of We Got Another Year! :3
That's it for now. Thanks for the support and keep on being awesome everyone! <3
Comments
And yet, I ended up changing some things as it went! Thank you for the feedback, though! <3
Douglas Kim
2025-09-05 10:01:52 +0000 UTCTrue XD
Douglas Kim
2025-09-05 10:01:33 +0000 UTCI really like the progression of this chapter, it’s cool to see everyone willing to be amicable and have some desire to be better. Space for Matt? Wonder what that will entail!
Milo Smith
2025-08-01 18:19:50 +0000 UTC"boys will be boys" translation HE CAN'T CARE LESS!
Karmakat
2025-08-01 14:18:02 +0000 UTC
