My Netorase Obsession V0.2
Added 2024-09-03 03:03:50 +0000 UTCHi friends, sorry for the delay, but V0.2 of My Netorase Obsession is finally available. Here’s the link; please leave your comments and let me know what you think, it would really help me improve. And a huge thank you to everyone supporting the project, I appreciate it from the bottom of my heart. Cheers, and see you soon!
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Is,she nurse..u not give us her work detail...if she have work hospital...naybe add somthing happen in hospital with older sick man then she tell her husband about...and plz no lesbian too much game start good then go leziban its too boring to see
sslovoe
2024-09-06 05:18:26 +0000 UTCNot bad, I agree with Matthew that adding music and sound effects would go a long way if done properly. The sound effects and music can add a lot of atmosphere to the game, and can dramatically improve the erotic quality of a scene. Especially with NTR, as good and clever sound effects like moans, humping, wet noises, and bed springs can allow you to create an entire erotic scene without even showing a single character, not to mention enhancing the quality of a standard H-scene. Though naturally, better sound effects or clever use will take you further in terms of improving the quality of the game, even standard quality sounds are better than nothing in my book. Though, on to the actual update. I love the current air of innocence and almost playful tension that you currently have. The beauty to NTS is trust and controlled tension, that being the heroine should tease the cuck to please him, but not go beyond his comfort limits to cause him pain or displeasure. I like how you are slowly working up their exposure and comfort with NTS, and hope you continue to carefully do so for a few more updates. Though I hope while you are doing this you are slowly building up and hinting to the coming Major NTR Flag scenes. Meaning the scenes that will ultimately disrupt their careful NTS play and begin transitioning the story into real hard NTR. Though I believe doing this transition may prove slightly challenging so I recommend that you do some careful planning and take advantage of the early NTS play updates that are going to follow this one to prep your plan of attack. For example, I highly suggest taking advantage of the inherent erotic value of the penis reveal, first condom sex, and first creampie well, and prolonging and teasing these scenes. Though ideally you're going to want to also prep the story with mentions and early desires before these scenes to really build these scenes up, and to better connect them together to write a good and flowery corruption. A final suggestion would be to have Erica start to get some expectations, hints, or so on of Diego's penis or whatever you choose to use to make her fall. Lastly, take advantage of the multitude of different descriptions you can use to really make a scene come alive.
Austin Pugh
2024-09-04 22:52:03 +0000 UTCjust a suggestion since you want to go the game route maybe add some background music in the scenes would be cool
Matthew Gillespie
2024-09-03 23:06:12 +0000 UTClike game goes so sductive and sexy wife art make game good looking for more
sslovoe
2024-09-03 05:11:46 +0000 UTC
