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The Web of Power Ch. 27

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First smut with Fleur was top notch! Also funny how Daphne’s humiliation plan backfired. Now let’s see how they both deal with the situation hehehe… However I have one slight critique: the argument between Fleur and Daphne at the end was kinda repetitive. The same back and forth between both happened 2/3 times

TheWateringWizard

Patreon flags chapters for having adult content, the chapter gets taken down, I make edits, and the chapter may or may not be reinstated back again. Posting attachments solves the issues altogether.

The Black Earl

Why is there only attachments?

TheWateringWizard

Honestly, could've done without Fleur in this one. She's incredibly overrated as a character, and she always seems to get added into harem stories, so this one probably would've been fine without her added in. Too late now I guess. I was hoping to see either more OCs joining in, or different, less used characters. And now we get to deal with a very predictable Daphne/Fleur fight in the aftermath ruining the rest of the plot.

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