Where Your God Is
Added 2023-03-01 12:18:17 +0000 UTCHere's chapter one! I'll likely have the monthly poll up tomorrow and maybe work on the next chapter of Winning Peace while you guys vote for me to dedicate another month to Industrious (I know the score, I'm not stupid).
Anyway, thank everyone for supporting me and my writing. Words can't describe how much I appreciate it, but I'll keep giving you thousands of them at a time.
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When things get too serious later in the story make sure to cameo Don fluffles the cat from abridged
brad
2023-03-14 11:09:28 +0000 UTCWell I like it, but god damn stopping it there is mean.
Klever Kilvanya
2023-03-02 04:48:45 +0000 UTCAll I can think of right now is SAO Abridged Kirito’s voice: “Bu I got good news! You see, there’s no need to wonder where your god is! ‘Cause he’s right here- and he’s fresh out of mercy.” I’m really looking forward to how you twist Kirito to be a power gamer who isn’t socially disturbed, and hopefully have plenty of in jokes from the MMO space.
Andrew B
2023-03-02 00:11:44 +0000 UTCThe virus was uploaded by a group that invaded the company headquarters of Argus, who created the game. They’re the ones who killed people and are the reason why the SAO incident is happening in this timeline.
Slayer Anderson
2023-03-01 21:07:57 +0000 UTCThe devs didn’t die in SAO, we’re going far off the rails.
Slayer Anderson
2023-03-01 21:06:21 +0000 UTCWell, I'm sold on the premise. Good work!
Benjamin Hower
2023-03-01 19:36:23 +0000 UTCActually I think when he mentioned the devs were killed it also applied to Kayaba. From what I understood there was some kind of attack on the system that is running SAO and when it went public somebody, maybe a riot or maybe the antagonists, attacked the devs and killed them even when they were also diving and trying to fix the issue.
Guilherme Bezerra
2023-03-01 17:59:55 +0000 UTCYES. Bow before god! He’s going to be an even more BS existence now!
Cameron Burchett
2023-03-01 17:33:56 +0000 UTCOmg YES. Thank you.
Wolf Man
2023-03-01 14:54:15 +0000 UTCWhen I saw the vote I was like Meh, SAO? Nevermind, please continue. I want more.
Darkarma
2023-03-01 14:38:54 +0000 UTCThis is going to be very interesting. Sounds like he is the last living expert on SAO as well. Looking forward to seeing where you take this one.
Chris
2023-03-01 12:57:38 +0000 UTCCurrently the biggest question I have is why Si!Kazuto basically invited Suguha to try SAO? I am quite uncertain about the advantages he is planning to bring to SAO considering that Cardinal is a AI that constantly monitors and alters the various elements of the game In Real Time to mantain balance and that Kayaba is inside the game Aside from that i guess he is intimate with her (is this fic NSFW?), did he actually alter his NerveGear or it was just lip to calm her down? Still, really interesting
Axel Wate
2023-03-01 12:56:48 +0000 UTCI always have been ambivalent to SAO. It is not the best LN/anime series ever or particularly original but for all of it is tropes and gags it is at least competent in what it sets out do. I'm more excited to see precisely what new elements are going to be in play with a SI on the MC that knows so much more of whats in play. And where does a virus comes from to force the Nerve Gear like that ? Specially since this seems like a SI who knew what he was doing ?
Guilherme Bezerra
2023-03-01 12:49:10 +0000 UTCOooh this looks super interesting. What sort of bonuses or supreme knowledge would a game dev have in SAO? And was the developers dying a regular part of the anime? It does make sense for the madman running the show to kill anyone with the keys to his kingdom
araconos
2023-03-01 12:29:52 +0000 UTC
