The New Ron: Chapter 10
Added 2022-08-19 11:39:51 +0000 UTCSo... writing a body swap episode across gender lines is a hot mess. Both because it's hot and because it's a mess.
Up until now, I've been keeping to one/two chapters per episode, but I'm very obviously breaking that trend here. There's a great deal I want to cover from Mind Games and I've expanded the timeframe to do it in, since I consider it more reasonable for Drakken to take three/four days to relocate, set up shop, and be traceable than just a single day as per the canon episode. Next chapter will feature some NSFW content.
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It will be hilarious when Kim never comments on why Ron avoids tight pants going forward after experiencing them herself
Sksk4128
2022-08-21 18:03:56 +0000 UTCNot sure what would be funnier. If Kim-in-Ron gets overly horny in class or whatever due to being unused to the male libido and starts making it awkwardly obvious to everyone, or if it did so on top of her still liking men but only until a bit after it kicks in and then as time passes she’s “straight” and chasing girls for extra confusion. SI Ron seems like he’s get over it pretty quick if there was any social flak or whatever due to already living through HS and entering the real world to see how little it matters, and his new GF might be pursuaded about the situation with Kim and some situational evidence, but Kim would still be mortified anyway no matter how anyone tried to calm her down. Alternatively, we could get something like Kim showing up at Ron’s door all flustered, because “she can’t make it go away” or whatever cliche situation you could craft like that.
pomegranate horsie
2022-08-21 04:10:47 +0000 UTCThis story is beautiful and you're beautiful for writing it
Vanathor
2022-08-19 15:00:17 +0000 UTCBefore anyone asks, yes the pronouns are deliberate. If people think they're legitimately confusing or just don't like them, I may revise, but after trying to write this chapter a few different ways, I think this came out the best.
Slayer Anderson
2022-08-19 11:47:12 +0000 UTC
