Originally in that bottom panel, Halver was gritting his teeth more. I wanted to express that he was really feeling this too. Often I end up showing women screaming their heads off while the men are stoic as statues during orgasms, which I'd like to change moving forward if I can. But with those shark teeth of his I found it really changed the vibe of the whole panel. I felt like it unintentionally implied a level of aggression on his part that wasn't fitting at all for a kind-hearted type like Halver.
Hope you guys like the page, been awhile since I've done a good old fashioned x-ray panel! XD
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