This Romantic World Page 324
Added 2023-10-06 05:18:46 +0000 UTCThe sudden scene transition is a common device in most forms of visual media. Yet whenever I try to do it between pages, I often leave readers feeling like they missed a page somewhere. The solution? Have the change take place on a single page rather than between them!
It's admittedly not a perfect solution. Not for me, anyway. I try to close each page with something punchy if I can, and instead the final panel is taken up with the task of saying "okay, we're over here now." Not exactly punchy, but the hope is that I've managed to cultivate some suspense as to what will happen next in place of that.
As always I'd love to hear your input, and I hope you like the page!
Comments
…or water board him by using his head as a dildo?
ShadowSkill
2023-10-10 01:47:51 +0000 UTCHey thanks for the feedback in any case! :)
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:47:23 +0000 UTCPossibly! ;D
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:46:53 +0000 UTC;D
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:46:42 +0000 UTCI did consider that. The fact is, every single non-canon pic I've ever done of Switch over the last eight years, she had the piercings. It just felt wrong to leave them out at this point, even if they don't make a ton of sense.
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:46:32 +0000 UTCUnderstandable at this point!
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:45:16 +0000 UTC:O
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:44:37 +0000 UTCQuite so atm! :D
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:44:27 +0000 UTC;D
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:44:19 +0000 UTCWell put! XD
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:44:14 +0000 UTCWe'll come back to them at the end of the chapter! ;D
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:43:30 +0000 UTCThanks!
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:43:09 +0000 UTCGreat! That's pretty much what I'm going for.
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:41:28 +0000 UTCNoted! :)
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:41:05 +0000 UTCThanks!
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:40:52 +0000 UTCIf you know Switch from the game, I'd say you know her well. In her debut comic I was still figuring out what I wanted her to be as a character. She didn't really become the Switch we know until the game.
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:40:45 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:39:40 +0000 UTC:O
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:39:25 +0000 UTCThanks! I'll keep that in mind for next time.
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:39:19 +0000 UTCThat is indeed shown to be within her power! XD
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:38:58 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:38:29 +0000 UTCThanks for the input! :)
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:38:25 +0000 UTCThanks!
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:38:07 +0000 UTCInteresting idea! :)
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:37:59 +0000 UTCWe're about to get into that! :)
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:37:34 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:37:15 +0000 UTC;D
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:37:10 +0000 UTCThese two will both be alive when next we see them! XD
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:37:05 +0000 UTCGlad to have the hype! :)
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:36:43 +0000 UTC;D
Reinbach
2023-10-10 01:36:31 +0000 UTCI think a sudden transition between scenes and pages works pretty well when the comic is being reread after the fact. Especially in PDF format when you're just scrolling through. But for the week to week delivery having the jump on the same page is likely better. Personally I think the former is more effective unless the latter is going for a comedic juxtaposition. But that's just my two cents, I don't think I've ever been confused by a sudden jump so I might just be the wrong person to talk about it lol
Snizzlefit
2023-10-07 19:16:28 +0000 UTCDid Switch just get dumped?
Malmedee
2023-10-07 17:07:27 +0000 UTChmmm that sudden transition to Liz, it's not foreboding at all.....
Graci
2023-10-07 08:45:37 +0000 UTCWhere exactly did an otherworldly entity like Switch get her nipples pierced?
Deano
2023-10-07 04:17:47 +0000 UTCI don't like this guy. Not a single redeemable thing about him.
Kudos707
2023-10-07 03:41:18 +0000 UTCSeems like the simple solution would be to conduct behavioral reprogramming by hanging him on chains and hooks like Pinhead from Hellraiser, while Switch goes to town on his ass with a Switch sized studded dildo, while also clockwork oranging his eyes to Lifetime cable tv or Oprah or something.
ShadowSkill
2023-10-07 02:59:36 +0000 UTCDude's a prick
Licorice Lain
2023-10-06 23:46:02 +0000 UTCThat cutaway has me cooking up theories
MechaBlerd
2023-10-06 21:32:14 +0000 UTCOof. I could HEAR the music build to panel four that then just . . .change. That boy is in deep trouble.
KaijuWhite
2023-10-06 16:27:23 +0000 UTCSooo. Is this just a cut away? Or are we going to see what she does to that shitiot?
Slaughterbug
2023-10-06 15:11:52 +0000 UTCSwitch looking amazing on this page, love me a powerful woman. Also I think the transition does work better on the same page rather than between pages :)
HungryOuroboros
2023-10-06 14:32:57 +0000 UTCWow, Liz looks hella-pretty there. A very "normal" expression, too. Kind of fits how "off" she might be over whatever Miguel said to her.
ScuzzBucket
2023-10-06 11:07:05 +0000 UTCNot gonna lie. I hope he does get his comeupins. I'm not prudish enough to particularly mind his antics, but the fact that he really just does not seem to care about about the aftermath makes them less hot in retrospect. So uh yeah. Comeupins.
Jon
2023-10-06 10:22:30 +0000 UTCWell, he did say he wanted to feel something...
GregD
2023-10-06 09:51:52 +0000 UTCPerfect transition.
NKL
2023-10-06 09:29:01 +0000 UTCSuitable, considering the cliff”hanger” :)
NKL
2023-10-06 09:00:02 +0000 UTCThe thought occurs that I only actually know Switch from the video game. I may not be entirely aware of who she is as a person, which honestly was part of the climax of the game. But then, you have successfully characterized him as enough of a douche canoe, I believe is the technical term, that I can’t see I’d be too broken up if that transition cut covered him coming to a sticky end.
SpectralTime
2023-10-06 07:54:08 +0000 UTC… what a monumental dick. And not in the good way.
KnightRider007
2023-10-06 07:24:34 +0000 UTC...And when we finally cut back to Vincent, he looks like Jason Issacs' character from Event Horizon...
Squid Hills
2023-10-06 07:18:40 +0000 UTCmaybe have some of the chains break the panel and keep travelling down to help with the transition visually some more? but switch looks fucking great
Mac
2023-10-06 06:51:26 +0000 UTCIt's all fun and games till switch makes him flaccid for life unless he does what she tells him.
Taylored Printers
2023-10-06 06:49:43 +0000 UTCDude fucked around (also literally) and is about to find out (also possibly literally)
Daniel S
2023-10-06 06:20:25 +0000 UTCIt's a good choice. Could've added a small panel of Vincent screaming to help ease the transition, but this works better than sudden transitions. Needs work, but better than the alternative.
Alex
2023-10-06 06:02:13 +0000 UTCAlso, the transition works great!
MAR
2023-10-06 05:42:53 +0000 UTCShe’s beautiful when she’s angry. All the time really, but wow, does she look good here. Hopefully Vincent is about to get a whole lot of other people’s feelings and memories. Seeing things from his former lovers perspective might round out his point of view. Adding incidental victims like his brother could drive the point home.
MAR
2023-10-06 05:41:46 +0000 UTCI’m worried about Liz more than him.
Lord Washington
2023-10-06 05:38:41 +0000 UTC*Claps hands* Switch is becoming the monster i knew she could always be... Excellent
Jariah Synn
2023-10-06 05:36:55 +0000 UTCSomebody about to get hurt
Eric Shepherd
2023-10-06 05:26:01 +0000 UTClove this half demonic look for switch has also i was starting to like this guy i hope he isn't about to die
alex baker
2023-10-06 05:22:03 +0000 UTCOoooh dear. Switch is LIVID. *Gets popcorn*
Kyman201
2023-10-06 05:21:26 +0000 UTCOh boy. Switch is gonna get ballistic...
Kherbellos
2023-10-06 05:20:42 +0000 UTC
