This Romantic World Page 276
Added 2022-11-18 09:29:15 +0000 UTCRemember how I said I'd post well before I went to bed? I was wrong on that, lol. But I think I can sleep well enough on this one, despite working until the last minute. I think I'm happy with how it all came together, but don't be surprised if I end up making some tweaks tomorrow.
Since I might be refining a few things tomorrow, now's a good time for feedback! What do you think? This is one of the wordier pages I've done in awhile, curious to hear how it goes over.
Comments
XD
Reinbach
2022-11-26 04:12:39 +0000 UTCRaccoon pounce?
frank barry
2022-11-25 17:04:14 +0000 UTCHahaha, no, it's more of a 90's romcom, but a pretty good one. It's a bit depressing and a little cliche to be honest, but I'd watch it if it's on.
rah
2022-11-22 21:05:50 +0000 UTCWould certainly be an interesting way to meet your special someone! XD
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:37:01 +0000 UTCShe would make noise if she saw Chloe. XD
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:36:45 +0000 UTCI've never seen that one, so I guess that means she doesn't. Is it about spying on people?
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:35:22 +0000 UTCMe too! XD
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:34:36 +0000 UTCHey great to hear! :)
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:34:29 +0000 UTCThat's the question! XD
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:34:18 +0000 UTCSounds fun! :)
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:34:07 +0000 UTCStay tuned if you would! ;D
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:33:50 +0000 UTCMuch appreciated! :)
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:33:35 +0000 UTCThanks! I think it conveys "background noise" dialog pretty well.
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:32:13 +0000 UTCYou know, I always meant for her to be tall and lanky, but I don't think I ever showed it off well until now. XD
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:31:45 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:31:06 +0000 UTCSolid theory! :)
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:30:54 +0000 UTCThat's what counts then! XD
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:30:22 +0000 UTCSounds like she still has a lot to learn about peeping! XD
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:29:57 +0000 UTCSolid points! :)
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:29:39 +0000 UTCThank you! I've been trying out a new style for painting hair lately and I think it's working well.
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:29:18 +0000 UTCSuccess! :D
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:28:49 +0000 UTCQuite likely! XD
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:28:23 +0000 UTCIt was indeed the tree pose that murdered me. XD And yes, it does seem like Chloe's just had a run of bad luck because there are romantic couples to be found.
Reinbach
2022-11-22 05:28:11 +0000 UTCBranch gonna break? Or will she squirt on someone below? (and that person becomes her new love interest?)
frank barry
2022-11-22 01:03:50 +0000 UTCWhere’s that squirrel?
frank barry
2022-11-22 01:02:20 +0000 UTCIs Liz bird watching right now?
frank barry
2022-11-22 01:01:39 +0000 UTCDoes she know that movies like Notting Hill exist?
rah
2022-11-21 17:58:29 +0000 UTCI think my hear t would stop if a woman cosplayed perfectly as Chloe in this outfit.
The Funny Hatter
2022-11-20 16:38:08 +0000 UTCPerhaps Chloe, being one of the visual novel characters, encourages you to write more lengthy inner monologue by proxy? Either way, loving it. Chloe continues to be the highlight in every scene she's in. <3
Missing Link
2022-11-19 22:47:45 +0000 UTCBrilliant. And the plot tightens. Will she fall?
eF..cz
2022-11-19 19:20:36 +0000 UTCI feel so bad for Chloe...Maybe she needs to spy on her Mom and Sylvia more....Those two seem to have genuine feelings for each other...Or better yet, she needs a foreign exchange student to arrive from Europe and sweep her off her feet! Much to the dismay of her Mother and Brother...Just my two cents worth of a future story idea...Maybe I'll commission that...
Chris Davis
2022-11-19 17:03:51 +0000 UTCAll over the room? Hmm, wonder how big his whole load is.
SpiceofVice
2022-11-19 07:22:13 +0000 UTCLooks great mate. And don't worry about being late sometimes! We would rather it late than you burn yourself out on a crunch!
Axel Foley
2022-11-19 04:17:29 +0000 UTCI love the inclusion of Kayden's background dialog half-hidden behind everything else that is going on.
IndecentTwig
2022-11-19 01:57:12 +0000 UTCKaydens shading is simply outstanding. Adds real (not sure of the of the word) presence to his face and actually makes him seem elegantly masculine, highlighting sinew and line. Chloe proportions however seem very mature, a little more leggy and lithe than we’ve seen before. Not the more petite sexpot from previous models.
Ally
2022-11-18 22:19:48 +0000 UTCChloe's incredible core strength and perfect sense of balance are some if her most attractive features, tbh.
HungryOuroboros
2022-11-18 21:07:07 +0000 UTCIf I had to attempt some fantastically amateurish psychoanalysis, the underlying reason Chloe's having trouble isn't just because she can't voyeur a deeper emotional connection, but because she's either unable or unwilling (i.e. scared) to have the connection she secretly wants for herself -- namely, a romantic partner in Isaac.
Rascal
2022-11-18 20:24:35 +0000 UTCShe might actually fall off the branch,,, her tits look great, though :)
NKL
2022-11-18 19:15:14 +0000 UTCJeez, Chloe, if its romance you're looking for, stop stalking high school kids. They're just horny. If you'd broaden your horizons a bit, you could've been at Sylvia and Raina's hot tub threesome and seen a sex party that ended in a (aborted) marriage proposal. Step up your game, girl!
Squid Hills
2022-11-18 17:28:18 +0000 UTCMaybe she's just spying in the wrong places. There isn't much connection happening in Castlewood highs classrooms and God forbid nurses office. But if she checked out miss Holts office when Shiro visits she'd probably see some sweet romance. Also hope she doesn't fall and become the definition of an awkward bomb.
Slaughterbug
2022-11-18 16:26:42 +0000 UTCFirst off, when it comes to the twins, the shading and highlights in that GORGEOUS blue colored hair always impresses me. As for the rest of the page, phenomenal work as always my man.
logan schade
2022-11-18 13:18:53 +0000 UTCDude. You just made the title of this ongoing comic Mean something. Also there's something hugely ironic behind the fact that there is actually romance out there in this sleepy suburb, but its happening in relationships Chloe would have a hard time spying on! Or it's happening not as a result of sex specifically, like Raina and Sylvie. ... and Scuzzbucket has already made these points, so I feel silly. 😅 Thinking about it, there Are potential other budding romances out there. But the participants haven't gotten there emotionally yet. And it makes me wonder about Halver and Switch. If their presence or something else is actually Making everyone oversexed. Dammit! YOU'RE MAKING ME THINK ABOUT PLOT! 😜
GregD
2022-11-18 11:32:30 +0000 UTCMy first thought when I saw the page was "she's going to fall out of that motherfucker"
omegazette
2022-11-18 10:03:59 +0000 UTCAGGGHHHHHHH her FACE when she demands "BEG, lady boy!" What are you DOING to me, Rein? It's not fair! And... holy shit, her ass in that riding panel. That's incredible. I love the little "triangle speed lines" you draw to showcase motion, and her ass looks TIGHT. The thinner linework on her ass cheeks really works. I don't know if I've seen you draw that tight of a puckered asshole before, but the whole shot is just really incredible. I'm assuming that tree pose is the one that murdered you, and I can see why since she's in 3 dimensions and lying on something while also twisting. It looks fine to me. I am liking the way it's done overall- Chloe's desire to see romance actually reflects my own, in a way- the characters randomly fuck so much that it's the pages where there's actually STUFF going on are the ones that come off as the important sex scenes- things like Morgan trying on a new persona, Miss Holt's secret dalliance, Abbey losing her virginity and being obsessed with Casey who unwisely fucks her. So ironically Chloe is missing out on her targets despite her obsession- if she wanted to catch love she'd be following one of the SECRET relationships- Casey/Royce, Nadine/Shiro... even Bria/Royce.
ScuzzBucket
2022-11-18 09:46:11 +0000 UTC
