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Added 2022-04-29 02:24:21 +0000 UTCI thought about putting some more expository dialog in that first panel to remind readers that this is indeed the first time she's had the sensation of somebody blowing inside her, but everything I came up with had the feel of loosely-translated subtitles on a hentai video. You know the kind, where the woman's "dirty talk" reads more like she's just narrating what's happening to her. I figured less was more, and just did my best to express what I wanted with her moan placement and expression up there. Let me know what you think, this scene is close to wrapping up! :)
Comments
Gotcha! :)
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:42:46 +0000 UTCNice! XD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:42:27 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:42:03 +0000 UTCFor sure! :)
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:41:59 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:41:50 +0000 UTCThis. XD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:41:37 +0000 UTCNoted! :)
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:41:31 +0000 UTCThank you!
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:41:23 +0000 UTCNot a bad comparison! XD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:41:17 +0000 UTCGreat to hear! :)
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:40:38 +0000 UTCAwesome! :)
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:40:31 +0000 UTCThank you!
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:40:24 +0000 UTCHad to have it! XD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:40:17 +0000 UTCThanks!
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:40:09 +0000 UTCMaybe a little! :)
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:40:04 +0000 UTCThank you! I'm doing my best on that.
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:39:53 +0000 UTCShe would! :)
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:39:39 +0000 UTCGood to know! :)
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:39:30 +0000 UTCI try to fit them in where I can! :) At least in TRW I stick to the characters that make sense with them. I put a Suikoden shirt on Casey at one point in Switch, she's not supposed to even know what a video game is lol, let alone esoteric rpg's from 20 years ago.
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:39:14 +0000 UTCHe did get teased a fair amount here for sure. XD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:37:45 +0000 UTCQuite so! XD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:37:31 +0000 UTCUnderstood! Though I still feel two pregnancies in the same chapter would be overdoing it and stealing some of the impact. XD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:37:22 +0000 UTCHey no worries, that's part of why I chose an ensemble cast for TRW. It gives me a chance to shake up the characters every scene.
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:36:41 +0000 UTCHigh fives! :)
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:35:59 +0000 UTCNoted! I'll keep that in mind for next time.
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:35:44 +0000 UTCThanks!
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:34:52 +0000 UTCYou only have to wait until Thursday to find out! ;D
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:34:44 +0000 UTCThank you!
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:34:19 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:34:11 +0000 UTCGreat! :)
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:34:06 +0000 UTCWhat a way to go! XD
Reinbach
2022-05-03 01:33:58 +0000 UTCAgreed! Like, Morgan would be VERY BUSTY in real life. The huge udders of the rest of the cast make her look petite by comparison, but these are perfect proportions.
ScuzzBucket
2022-05-02 20:26:07 +0000 UTCOnly thing I can think of exposition-wise is, in the first panel, change "O-oh!" to "O-oh?"
Mark Hunter
2022-05-02 17:52:25 +0000 UTCSpeaks for itself most eloquently! For me, the ideal next scene would be her, totally into it, dragging him, still in WTF? mode, into the shower to "clean up" (maybe with some hint that it's a hot water on demand system to explain why they're comfortable for the length of a long, steamy scene) then, just when he becomes completely comfortable, and is about to ask her out on a date, she snaps out of it and runs for the hills! Which would be thematically compatible with all his other attempts, too!
Mark Hunter
2022-05-02 17:45:12 +0000 UTCThats like ExxonValdez spill size and is never gonna come out of that couch.
frank barry
2022-04-29 22:05:48 +0000 UTCWow, that's an impressive amount, even by TRW standards. I'm glad that they got to this point after some of the predictions from the previous page. At this point, both seem pretty happy.
Deus
2022-04-29 21:45:12 +0000 UTCThey really should have put down a large towel or something first. Iβd like to see a scene where a race is going to start with black lights and everyone backs out of the room after seeing splooge covering everything.
ShadowSkill
2022-04-29 15:03:20 +0000 UTC"my hips are moving on their own!"
nick
2022-04-29 13:30:34 +0000 UTCHmm. Only thing I could think of some kind of small light bulb built into the word bubble or something like that. A kind of "so that's what that feels like" moment of realization.
George
2022-04-29 13:05:29 +0000 UTCThat first panel is incredible
crowspeak
2022-04-29 10:32:56 +0000 UTCThey just finished, and I already want more. Great job! You remember that scene near the end of Scary Movie after their first time having sex? Iβm sure Warren felt the same just then.
rah
2022-04-29 09:41:13 +0000 UTComg, that first panel expression... I repeat my earlier comment that this is *the* most erotic scene I think you've drawn yet.
KnightRider007
2022-04-29 05:27:56 +0000 UTCThis has been really hot
MaximumHavoc
2022-04-29 05:16:49 +0000 UTCI think the scene is great for taking by itself. You did marvelous work there, I am very impressed
Kherbellos
2022-04-29 04:32:27 +0000 UTCCum on glasses. Check!
Jariah Synn
2022-04-29 04:22:11 +0000 UTCAgreed, less was more π
Nikuthulhu
2022-04-29 03:52:53 +0000 UTCHa! I knew it. Warren is developing a taste for being in charge.
Andrew Sayles
2022-04-29 03:50:46 +0000 UTCIgnoring the obvious for a second, the lighting on this page is really nice, especially for Morgan. Panels 1 and 2 in particular do a great job of creating the illusion of 3d.
HungryOuroboros
2022-04-29 03:42:30 +0000 UTCLiz would be proud.
SpiceofVice
2022-04-29 03:37:39 +0000 UTCI think Morgan is the hottest girl because sheβs the one that looks the most like a normal person. She has big boobs without them being giant.
Matthew Cronin
2022-04-29 03:14:15 +0000 UTCIt.... took me THIS long to realize he was rockin' a soul reaver tee. My dude, first the Resident Evil 2 script on the chalk board and now this!? I'm gonna have to scour your entire library for these 90s videogame easter eggs...
Mary Shelley's Monster
2022-04-29 03:12:50 +0000 UTCOkay that's a bit TOO much cum for me, lol. But a sufficient ending considering how long Warren was edging for (he nearly came BEFORE they started having sex).
ScuzzBucket
2022-04-29 02:50:25 +0000 UTCThis page right here... Is the culmination of LONG standing sexual tension. Wow. Super hot. And yeah, as mentioned before, that couch is DONE.
NomadicWanderer
2022-04-29 02:47:51 +0000 UTCNot gonna lie: I was REALLY hoping Morgan was going to get knocked up at the end.
Vylon Delta
2022-04-29 02:46:31 +0000 UTCI'm certain in the minority here, but Warren and Morgan are the characters I'm least excited to see of the regular cast members
Molten Reactor
2022-04-29 02:42:07 +0000 UTCWarren has always been an erupting volcano with his nut for all the times we've seen him, that being said, ayoo my man really got his bestie prego! That's the most he's ever shot, and he's still goin!!
PhantomZone
2022-04-29 02:37:26 +0000 UTCDamn that's hot. Maybe it's just my thing but I would love to see her describe what it felt like. Either way seeing her covered in cum after her first creampie is a long awaited moment that lived up to every expectation.
Slaughterbug
2022-04-29 02:35:54 +0000 UTCThat o face is just perfect π«¦ππ
korraspats
2022-04-29 02:33:59 +0000 UTCI was hoping for a whole page of Warren absolutely hosing Morgan, and Reinbach delivers! Iβm nervous for Warren when she snaps out of it. Thankfully, not yet.
Dorcas
2022-04-29 02:33:51 +0000 UTCThis is perfect. This whole bit has been utterly perfect. I want what both of them are having π₯°π₯°π₯°
Merjia
2022-04-29 02:27:48 +0000 UTCWarren might need medical attention lol, that's inhuman ππ
Taylored Printers
2022-04-29 02:26:44 +0000 UTCNo notes. Just, Warren and Morgan has been one of my fav moments so far.
GregD
2022-04-29 02:26:13 +0000 UTCI think Warren is about to die of dehydration.
Squid Hills
2022-04-29 02:26:06 +0000 UTC
