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I thought about putting some more expository dialog in that first panel to remind readers that this is indeed the first time she's had the sensation of somebody blowing inside her, but everything I came up with had the feel of loosely-translated subtitles on a hentai video. You know the kind, where the woman's "dirty talk" reads more like she's just narrating what's happening to her. I figured less was more, and just did my best to express what I wanted with her moan placement and expression up there. Let me know what you think, this scene is close to wrapping up! :) 

This Romantic World Page 243

Comments

Gotcha! :)

Reinbach

Nice! XD

Reinbach

XD

Reinbach

For sure! :)

Reinbach

XD

Reinbach

This. XD

Reinbach

Noted! :)

Reinbach

Thank you!

Reinbach

Not a bad comparison! XD

Reinbach

Great to hear! :)

Reinbach

Awesome! :)

Reinbach

Thank you!

Reinbach

Had to have it! XD

Reinbach

Thanks!

Reinbach

Maybe a little! :)

Reinbach

Thank you! I'm doing my best on that.

Reinbach

She would! :)

Reinbach

Good to know! :)

Reinbach

I try to fit them in where I can! :) At least in TRW I stick to the characters that make sense with them. I put a Suikoden shirt on Casey at one point in Switch, she's not supposed to even know what a video game is lol, let alone esoteric rpg's from 20 years ago.

Reinbach

He did get teased a fair amount here for sure. XD

Reinbach

Quite so! XD

Reinbach

Understood! Though I still feel two pregnancies in the same chapter would be overdoing it and stealing some of the impact. XD

Reinbach

Hey no worries, that's part of why I chose an ensemble cast for TRW. It gives me a chance to shake up the characters every scene.

Reinbach

High fives! :)

Reinbach

Noted! I'll keep that in mind for next time.

Reinbach

Thanks!

Reinbach

You only have to wait until Thursday to find out! ;D

Reinbach

Thank you!

Reinbach

XD

Reinbach

Great! :)

Reinbach

What a way to go! XD

Reinbach

Agreed! Like, Morgan would be VERY BUSTY in real life. The huge udders of the rest of the cast make her look petite by comparison, but these are perfect proportions.

ScuzzBucket

Only thing I can think of exposition-wise is, in the first panel, change "O-oh!" to "O-oh?"

Mark Hunter

Speaks for itself most eloquently! For me, the ideal next scene would be her, totally into it, dragging him, still in WTF? mode, into the shower to "clean up" (maybe with some hint that it's a hot water on demand system to explain why they're comfortable for the length of a long, steamy scene) then, just when he becomes completely comfortable, and is about to ask her out on a date, she snaps out of it and runs for the hills! Which would be thematically compatible with all his other attempts, too!

Mark Hunter

Thats like ExxonValdez spill size and is never gonna come out of that couch.

frank barry

Wow, that's an impressive amount, even by TRW standards. I'm glad that they got to this point after some of the predictions from the previous page. At this point, both seem pretty happy.

Deus

They really should have put down a large towel or something first. I’d like to see a scene where a race is going to start with black lights and everyone backs out of the room after seeing splooge covering everything.

ShadowSkill

"my hips are moving on their own!"

nick

Hmm. Only thing I could think of some kind of small light bulb built into the word bubble or something like that. A kind of "so that's what that feels like" moment of realization.

George

That first panel is incredible

crowspeak

They just finished, and I already want more. Great job! You remember that scene near the end of Scary Movie after their first time having sex? I’m sure Warren felt the same just then.

rah

omg, that first panel expression... I repeat my earlier comment that this is *the* most erotic scene I think you've drawn yet.

KnightRider007

This has been really hot

MaximumHavoc

I think the scene is great for taking by itself. You did marvelous work there, I am very impressed

Kherbellos

Cum on glasses. Check!

Jariah Synn

Agreed, less was more πŸ‘

Nikuthulhu

Ha! I knew it. Warren is developing a taste for being in charge.

Andrew Sayles

Ignoring the obvious for a second, the lighting on this page is really nice, especially for Morgan. Panels 1 and 2 in particular do a great job of creating the illusion of 3d.

HungryOuroboros

Liz would be proud.

SpiceofVice

I think Morgan is the hottest girl because she’s the one that looks the most like a normal person. She has big boobs without them being giant.

Matthew Cronin

It.... took me THIS long to realize he was rockin' a soul reaver tee. My dude, first the Resident Evil 2 script on the chalk board and now this!? I'm gonna have to scour your entire library for these 90s videogame easter eggs...

Mary Shelley's Monster

Okay that's a bit TOO much cum for me, lol. But a sufficient ending considering how long Warren was edging for (he nearly came BEFORE they started having sex).

ScuzzBucket

This page right here... Is the culmination of LONG standing sexual tension. Wow. Super hot. And yeah, as mentioned before, that couch is DONE.

NomadicWanderer

Not gonna lie: I was REALLY hoping Morgan was going to get knocked up at the end.

Vylon Delta

I'm certain in the minority here, but Warren and Morgan are the characters I'm least excited to see of the regular cast members

Molten Reactor

Warren has always been an erupting volcano with his nut for all the times we've seen him, that being said, ayoo my man really got his bestie prego! That's the most he's ever shot, and he's still goin!!

PhantomZone

Damn that's hot. Maybe it's just my thing but I would love to see her describe what it felt like. Either way seeing her covered in cum after her first creampie is a long awaited moment that lived up to every expectation.

Slaughterbug

That o face is just perfect πŸ«¦πŸ‘ŒπŸ™

korraspats

I was hoping for a whole page of Warren absolutely hosing Morgan, and Reinbach delivers! I’m nervous for Warren when she snaps out of it. Thankfully, not yet.

Dorcas

This is perfect. This whole bit has been utterly perfect. I want what both of them are having πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°

Merjia

Warren might need medical attention lol, that's inhuman πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Taylored Printers

No notes. Just, Warren and Morgan has been one of my fav moments so far.

GregD

I think Warren is about to die of dehydration.

Squid Hills


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