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Added 2018-06-15 01:56:23 +0000 UTCWhen I start writing a scene I rarely have one definitive end to it in mind. Of the ideas I had, I settled on the one where Mr. Birch gets punished and I think it feels right. I decided to keep his wife's appearance ambiguous for now, as I may want to come back to her some time if I get any good story ideas about a cucking milf who wants revenge.
Meanwhile so ends chapter one! I'll get the PDF for the $5+ tier uploaded this weekend. Hope you guys liked it, and I'm looking forward to catching up with the other girls in the coming pages.
Comments
You mean for dudes to get revenge with? I would like to have an older girl/younger guy couple sometime. Might be an idea.
Reinbach
2018-06-17 23:13:30 +0000 UTCI hope his wife goes hunting at the high school hehe
Kudos707
2018-06-17 14:17:35 +0000 UTC:D
Reinbach
2018-06-16 10:56:23 +0000 UTCThanks!
Reinbach
2018-06-16 10:55:55 +0000 UTCI may come back to her someday!
Reinbach
2018-06-16 10:55:48 +0000 UTCA solid first chapter definitely a lot of hook.
alex baker
2018-06-16 04:00:10 +0000 UTCMakes me wonder what hos wife looks like
alex baker
2018-06-16 03:52:26 +0000 UTCThanks! I'm trying to get better about color balance.
Reinbach
2018-06-16 02:08:02 +0000 UTCNot a bad idea at all! Sounds like I'll have some options to consider if I bring Mrs. Birch around again.
Reinbach
2018-06-16 02:07:25 +0000 UTCAlso, not sure if it was planned, but i really like the color coordination of greens and blues
Zalsfm
2018-06-15 23:55:59 +0000 UTCYah!
Zalsfm
2018-06-15 23:55:15 +0000 UTCHere's a hot idea. Why not have the wife corner Parker for some girl girl time? Turn the tables a little so she gets to enjoy Parker and get back at her husband? Just a hot little thought :)
S.R.R115
2018-06-15 11:30:13 +0000 UTCYeah, it's the tricky thing with huge casts like this- you kind of have to introduce them in small groups or nobody "sticks" with audiences. And in your case, it's a PORN comic, so people will inevitably get impatient and want to see people get drilled, too! And heck- I think you've only revealed something like 2/3 of the total new characters! We still haven't met Courtney, Holly, Jane, Derek or anyone else I'm forgetting!
ScuzzBucket
2018-06-15 08:14:22 +0000 UTCGlad the beginning is going over well for you! I'm excited for the next chapter where I finally get to have some of these characters share scenes.
Reinbach
2018-06-15 07:49:23 +0000 UTCThat's the thing about her though: she never learns. Not with new people anyhow. She wouldn't be dumb enough to trust Mr. Birch again. But if someone new came along slinging the same bullshit, she'd fall for it again. she always assumes the best in people until she's proven wrong at least once.
Reinbach
2018-06-15 07:48:07 +0000 UTCWell said!
Reinbach
2018-06-15 07:46:36 +0000 UTCXD
Reinbach
2018-06-15 07:46:25 +0000 UTCI do want to have some skeevy guys to contrast the nice ones in TRW, and maybe have a few that fall somewhere in the middle as well.
Reinbach
2018-06-15 07:43:59 +0000 UTC:D
Reinbach
2018-06-15 07:42:42 +0000 UTCYeah, something about his smug little grin when he said the "I expect you to be naked" thing made him seem like a creeper. Also, you can't have sex with a teenager 1/3rd your body weight without looking like a weirdo :)
ScuzzBucket
2018-06-15 07:05:18 +0000 UTCI like how obvious it is he's utterly screwed. Just from his facial expressions, I get the idea that his wife ain't the forgiving type :). Great faces here. And I like how his wife's foot is all we need to see. Great composition there! Nice Chapter so far! I like how we're kind of teased and wanting more- one blowjob and one sex scene, with a LOT of characters we haven't seen get fucked yet! Plus the whole Lydia/MaleSwitch thing!
ScuzzBucket
2018-06-15 07:04:16 +0000 UTCI imagine Parker is gonna start questioning how much she can trust people after this.
Lord Washington
2018-06-15 05:14:18 +0000 UTCSome body's nuts just when into a vise and his wife holds the handle. :-)
Bob Fink
2018-06-15 03:53:26 +0000 UTCWOMP WOMP
Tukaro
2018-06-15 03:23:54 +0000 UTCGLad to see this guy punished. He just struck me as skeevier than your other guys.
Dantels
2018-06-15 03:15:30 +0000 UTCLmao
Angelo
2018-06-15 01:57:52 +0000 UTC
