This Romantic World Page 19
Added 2018-06-08 03:41:11 +0000 UTCI swear it feels like 90% of the work I did on this page was just on Parker's expressions in those first three panels. I was hoping to imply that she came so hard she forgot he was even there, and once she snaps back to reality she's embarrassed as hell. As always I'd be happy to hear if you guys think I pulled that off or if I could have done something differently to present it better.
Comments
Awesome! That panel was a lot of work so I'm glad you like the results. (I always have a really hard time drawing sideways faces.)
Reinbach
2018-06-08 22:10:37 +0000 UTCThat's true, and though I do have a few girls that would be up for public sex, they're outliers to the main cast. Bria is turned on by it, Liz simply doesn't care either way, and Courtney is too submissive to say no even if it makes her uncomfortable.
Reinbach
2018-06-08 22:06:11 +0000 UTCI think it worked nicely. But I have to say, I like those shameful doe eyes she has in panel 5 even more.
Walter L.
2018-06-08 20:43:02 +0000 UTCLlywelyn I think for the most part while this world is lewder(girl giving guy a bj in a hall closest while his clearly sexually frustrated female friend plays Lookout) there's still a sense of "sex isn't just happening in public and people are okay with it" (all the sex scenes have been in at least semi-secluded places with people worried about being caught) just sexual enough that everyone in the school is clearly fucking someone.
That black guy
2018-06-08 18:38:12 +0000 UTCI've always thought that one of the major flaws of having a setting be too openly lewd is that you can't quite have moments like those be all that common, despite them having fun narrative and fetish implications of their own...
LlywelynPenddraig
2018-06-08 17:42:52 +0000 UTCDesign Doll is a lifesaver of a program when it comes to foreshortened limbs. :)
Reinbach
2018-06-08 06:54:02 +0000 UTCright on! :)
Reinbach
2018-06-08 06:53:16 +0000 UTCI don't hear that word often enough lol. :)
Reinbach
2018-06-08 06:53:00 +0000 UTCAwesome. :)
Reinbach
2018-06-08 06:52:42 +0000 UTCI do like the idea of Parker's embarrassment about her fetish being unnecessary. It's a porn world after all, no one's going to care. But she still fights this uphill battle to keep it quiet.
Reinbach
2018-06-08 06:52:31 +0000 UTCD'awwwwwwww oh my gawwwwwwwwwwddddd Parker's FAAAAAAAAAACCCE... Panel 5 is just so extremely cute. I love her puppy-dog "shame-face". And holy God, that pose totally shames me as an artist- it's so good! Foreshortened legs, viewed from the front, are INSANELY hard. I mean, I know you have those programs that let you pose stuff, but wow. And yeah, I picked up on the expressions pretty easily. Looks like she snapped out of it in panel 2 and did an "oh no how do I get out of this one?" in panel 3. Also, LOL at her giant, fluffy "pillow hair" :).
ScuzzBucket
2018-06-08 05:31:09 +0000 UTCthat's the attention to detail i pay for
alex baker
2018-06-08 04:43:00 +0000 UTCWhat does Mr. B got up his sleeve? And glad he's like me, okay with Parker's freakiness
That black guy
2018-06-08 04:20:37 +0000 UTCI think you nailed it and she's so cute trying to hide her embarrassment. ;-)
Bob Fink
2018-06-08 04:10:56 +0000 UTCYeah, she's pretty much the apotheosis of "adorkable".
Squid Hills
2018-06-08 04:01:53 +0000 UTCThanks for noticing! I'm going to put some effort into giving the girls JBF hair whenever they've been on their backs.
Reinbach
2018-06-08 03:54:43 +0000 UTCawe so cute, love her bed head
alex baker
2018-06-08 03:53:35 +0000 UTC
