Switch Page 163
Added 2017-12-29 05:16:51 +0000 UTCI've come to like the look of Switch's hair and clothes trailing her as though she's moving under water. I like the idea of her looking like she's always in motion and I think the effect works for that.
A couple of people I've shown this page to were left a bit confused by the last panel. So I'm aware that the context I'm going for isn't as clear as it could be. It can be a tricky area for a writer, (well, for me anyway,) to present something that's just ambiguous enough to leave your readers to have fun coming up with their own conclusions, and not go too far and just come across as confusing. But the only way to learn is to keep at it and see what my readers think, so as always I'm open to your feedback.
Comments
Not a bad idea at all! :)
Reinbach
2018-01-03 04:58:06 +0000 UTCi what to see more of switch. side note if she is wearing a straight jacket, i wonder if she ever ties and let's herself just get used ;)
alex baker
2018-01-03 00:31:28 +0000 UTCIt was the slight SFW feel of this page, size difference between the two characters, the fact that only Casey can see/hear Switch, and the small possibility (from the dialogue) that Switch might leave Casey soon that reminded me a little of "Hikaru No Go".
WarSapphire
2018-01-02 15:47:47 +0000 UTCWell I've got a sketch AND a commission in the works featuring just that. But as for the story, even thought the comic bearing her name is almost over, I'm not done with Switch herself by a long shot. :)
Reinbach
2017-12-30 00:25:16 +0000 UTCHaven't heard of that one, what reminds you of it?
Reinbach
2017-12-30 00:24:04 +0000 UTCThe correlation between Switch's appearance and Casey's perception of her is what i wanted to convey, but I can't blame readers if they're too distracted by giant tits to pick up what I laid down there. XD
Reinbach
2017-12-30 00:19:16 +0000 UTCMore ass shots coming up! :D
Reinbach
2017-12-30 00:17:08 +0000 UTCIt would be a logical conclusion to jump to I'd imagine! XD
Reinbach
2017-12-30 00:15:37 +0000 UTCAre there going to be any sexy times involving Switch directly in the future?
Johnny Wishbone
2017-12-29 18:56:39 +0000 UTCWell I think I said this before about Switch's outfit when she first appeared in the comic but, her outfit does kind of resemble a straitjacket. Which then, the last panel would make sense with Casey’s dialogue and view of Switch’s body (besides her boobs :3). I like Casey’s little laugh in the 3rd panel after getting complimented by Switch, it’s very cute. Seems like Casey’s afraid Switch might leave her soon. Not sure what would happen to Casey if that happened. When they’re talking like this, I can’t help but be reminded of the anime “Hikaru No Go”.
WarSapphire
2017-12-29 11:47:39 +0000 UTCOh hey, I never picked up on that. It might have something to do with all the "Chain" imagery we see in the Covers, and when Switch appears in the strip, as well. Like Casey views Switch as something to do with going to the nuthouse, or a reflection of her own insanity.
ScuzzBucket
2017-12-29 08:27:38 +0000 UTCIs the last panel significance about the resemblance between Switch’s outfit and a straitjacket, I wonder? It seems less pronounced than it used to be, which may be the point...
Hollow49
2017-12-29 07:33:45 +0000 UTCLove Switch's hair doing that. Fittingly enough, that's the exact thing that Eris's hair does in that "Sinbad" animated movie (Commission Spoiler for the rest of you!). I dig the last panel. I'm pretty sure the view is because... well, giant purple boobs (poobs? voobs?). Unless Casey is just lezzing out over how hot Switch's rack is :). Casey's hesitance before she says "... crazy" is fitting, because she probably doesn't want to say it out loud. And the strip has mentioned in the past that someone even MENTIONING that word to her will send her into a full "Switch Fit" and come out a-swingin'. Switch's lil' panties make me excited. Something for you new comic: more ass shots! I know you like boobies and eyes a ton, but I feel like your "ass game" is strong enough for someone with a master-class butt, too! I bet it'd look totally delicious!
ScuzzBucket
2017-12-29 06:37:51 +0000 UTCVery well played, the rendering is awesome and Switch’s hair and clothing work perfectly. I like how Switch is basically telling Casey that her work is pretty much done and that kind of scares Casey. And yes when she first saw Switch, Casey did think she had lost it :-).
Bob Fink
2017-12-29 06:13:21 +0000 UTCThat's a coincidence. I'd rather not blow it right away, but I promise what I attempted to convey here will be obvious in time if you stick with my work.
Reinbach
2017-12-29 05:44:38 +0000 UTCHmm so I am missing something on this panel. I don't know what else I'm supposed to be seeing tbh. Looking back I see that you cut off half of Switch's face on the cover for this chapter as well. Is there a connection or is that a coincidence?
Angelo
2017-12-29 05:40:57 +0000 UTCI think the confusion was more as to why I put the "camera" where I did for that particular panel. As even though this is a porn comic, I don't usually exclude faces when the characters are just talking.
Reinbach
2017-12-29 05:30:37 +0000 UTCWhat confused people about the last panel? Is there something in the panel I'm supposed to be noticing besides her tits?
Angelo
2017-12-29 05:25:08 +0000 UTC
