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Celestial smith chapter 31 and 32

Celestial smith chapter 31: The End Of Bloodraven and 32: Volantis sets sail.

Thank you for your continued patience and monetary support during this time of my sickness. As promised, two new chapters that i hope will prove your faith in me as an author who keeps his word. I will try to get chapter 33 and 34 to you as quickly as possible while i recover so that public members may also read.

Thank you once more.

Comments

Thanks for the chapters

Tyler Karp

In regards to Chapter 31 good riddance to bad rubbish. Chapter 32: (Looks down at the grand slaver army grinning) Look at all that wonderful fertilizer.

RuGard190

come on he's already powerful enough to take over the world. could prob get those other 9 rings if he studys long enough no?

PhotoStorm

ohhh shy guy from scp that was nasty. I would have gone for the red king or possibly gone full Cthulhu but like u did made sure he couldnt lose his mind😳 nice one. am guessing that massive fleet will be sunk half way between some where ? couple dozen ships should be able to handle them easy....?

PhotoStorm

So nice of these Essosi slavers to concentrate most of their military assets into one force where they can be destroyed more efficiently. I applaud their consideration.

ShinySpiritomb

Is it weird that I feel for Doniphos? He may be a slaver, but at least he can feel the shift in the current. And good job to Malaqo. Thanks to his hard work getting the Unsullied, Essos' military power is going to be destroyed viciously and I'm here for it!

Carnacki23

Wow!!! Thanks for the chapter mate. 🥹

Psyren1596

The whole volatnis arc is stupid? What's their motivation for attacking Westeros? The funding for the war will cost more than the spoils they acquire

Retroman

If I were him I would be very annoyed about being the one protagonist who doesn't get regular power-up's though lol "Every other Celestial Forge hero in the fucking omniverse is getting power-ups all the time! What the heck is this bullshit?! Whys the golden goose not laying any more eggs!?"

Fire_Fox2590

I feel like limiting his power to a degree is probably for the best, or making larger rolls more expensive. Or forcing him to do something in order to GET more rolls. Like forcing him to do something significant to earn a roll, give him a couple rolls as a 'back payment' for not getting anything for a while, and then inform him that further rolls will need to be obtained by doing something big, like making peace between the South and North, increasing quality of life for everyone in the kingdom, eliminating slavery in that one country currently about to invade. Giving him a roll for every big achievement feels appropriate. You could even limit it further by forcing him to explore the roll entirely, and make use of it like he did with the Lexicon, make him learn it as much as he can and find ways to use it, before getting anything new.

Fire_Fox2590

Get well soon.

Hayden Williams

Everyone thinks he's OP already. But I will keep on rolling, just to see.

Xuzar Horan

I thought that might be the case. Although I am pretty sure someone has probably asked this already, but is he just not getting rolls anymore on the Forge? Or is there a point in time in which he will get more power-ups? I DO think that he is powerful enough already, but I am curious as to when it will kick back on, or if it is going to be off forever now. Or if there is going to be a new way of rolling for things.

Fire_Fox2590

Wondering who would catch that. He just made it from his memories. It's obviously not the real thing or it would attack him as well

Xuzar Horan

Wow, didn't know he could just summon SCPs. Unless it is a manifestation of the mind, and since it was a dream and he was aware he was dreaming, he could make it real in that space.

Fire_Fox2590

Hahaha, bloodraven is disposed off. And those essosi bastards are going to get burned by golem fire for real.

Iori Daemona Angel

Volantis sets sail is 31 right?

Alex Wierzbicki

Woot! An asshole finally got his long deserved comeuppance. Now all that remains currently are the Free Cities...

Slayer 10321

Man, those slavers are delusional. Taking every single westerosi castle would be a nightmare. Thats with an army of 300k from a very martial culture assembling all around you to take you on.

Lictor Magnus

You are a star for doing this thank you, we all would have understood if youd waited till you fully recovered from your infection/illness , so this is appreciated and im sure im not the only one who thinks the same

Jamie Celtic

Wasn’t the previous one also chapter 30 or am I hallucinating?

sLancelot

Thanks for the chapters! But do try to get some rest too, your health is the most important thing atm!

Berseman

I think the chapter number is wrong, chapter 30 came out a few days ago

Andreyebidu


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