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Vol 1 Outline Pt. 3

Work/First real date

After date

Juan and Julio

Going to stop the outline here for now but the rest of the volume will continue through this plot line and end after the second heart event. The reason I'm stopping here is because I need to see what Oliver's LP is like by this point before I have him and Bradley actually plot out how they're going to solve this problem. Realistically, Oliver has the option of buying four t1 skills that each raise his strength by one, but that would be extremely boring and not much fun so I need to see where he's at and how it can be made exciting/funny.

For the sake of balancing I might need to change it so that he gets one stat point for every other t1 skill instead of every single one. So for every two strength skills he'd get 1, meaning he can't just dump his LP into problems. We will see, I'll have to go back and edit some text for that one but it shouldn't be a big change.

In case you guys forgot or haven't read Mia's bio, her brothers are carpenters and this is all one big joke they're playing on him. All of their injuries are woodworking accidents. They are actually really nice guys and were just seeing if he took them seriously. The fact that he does proves that he and Mia are going to be good together and they accept him.

Comments

Literally the first sentence of the post script my dude lol

PunishedKom

So is first volume gonna end after Mia's second heart event or are we getting all the hearts in one volume? It seems like it would be an extremely long volume if it is all of them.

AzureXIII


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